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Journey to the Peach Garden (3)

Hello everyone! Today, I tried to translate a classical Chinese article called "Journey to the Peach Garden". I translated the original text in three parts. This is the third part of this article, and the first and the second part can be found on my homepage.

The fisherman found his boat when he had gone out the strange place. Then he went back the way. And marked everywhere. When he arrived in the county, the fisherman visited the prefecture chiet. He told the unbelieveable experience to him. The chief dispatched some people to find the strange place with the fisherman at once. They tried to find the marks what the fisherman put before. But to everyone surpnise, they got lost and couldn't find their way.
A man who lived in Nanyang named Ziji Liu was a noble character. One day he heard this story and was very happy, so he decided to go to the Peach Garden.But he didn't find this place, either. Liu died of an illness soon. And no one come to find the Peach Garden again.

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The chief dispatched some people to find the strange place with the fisherman at once.

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Journey to the Peach Garden (3)


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Hello everyone!


Hello, everyone! Hello, everyone!

Today, I tried to translate a classical Chinese article called "Journey to the Peach Garden".


Today, I tried to translate a classical Chinese articlestory called "Journey to the Peach Garden". Today, I tried to translate a classical Chinese story called "Journey to the Peach Garden".

I translated the original text in three parts.


I translated the original text into three parts. I translated the original text into three parts.

This is the third part of this article, and the first and the second part can be found on my homepage.


This is the third part of this article, and te series. The first and the second part can be found on my homepage. This is the third part of the series. The first and the second part can be found on my homepage.

It's okay to divide this into two sentences.

The fisherman found his boat when he had gone out the strange place.


TWhen the fisherman found his boat when he had gonewent out to the strange place, he found his boat. When the fisherman went out to the strange place, he found his boat.

The fisherman found his boat when he had gone ouafter he left the strange place. The fisherman found his boat after he left the strange place.

Then he went back the way.


Then he went back the way he came. Then he went back the way he came.

Then he went back the same way. Then he went back the same way.

And marked everywhere.


And marked everywhereleft marks on his path. And left marks on his path.

Not sure if this is entirely what you mean :)

And marked it everywhere. And marked it everywhere.

When he arrived in the county, the fisherman visited the prefecture chiet.


When he arrived in the counback to the village/town/city, the fisherman visited the prefecturelocal chietf. When he arrived back to the village/town/city, the fisherman visited the local chief.

"County" sounds very American and/or official to me :)

When he arrived in the county, the fisherman visited the prefecture chietf. When he arrived in the county, the fisherman visited the prefecture chief.

He told the unbelieveable experience to him.


He told thehim about his unbelieveable experience to him. He told him about his unbelievable experience.

He told thehim of his unbelieveable experience to him. He told him of his unbelievable experience.

The chief dispatched some people to find the strange place with the fisherman at once.


The chief dispatchedsent out some people at once, to find the strange place with the fisherman at once. The chief sent out some people at once, to find the strange place with the fisherman.

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They tried to find the marks what the fisherman put before.


They tried to find the marks what the fisherman puthad left on his trial home before. They tried to find the marks the fisherman had left on his trial home before.

They tried to find the marks what the fisherman put beforehad made earlier. They tried to find the marks the fisherman had made earlier.

But to everyone surpnise, they got lost and couldn't find their way.


But to everyone's surpnrise, they got lost and couldn't find their way. But to everyone's surprise, they got lost and couldn't find their way.

But to everyone's surpnrise, they got lost and couldn't find their way. But to everyone's surprise, they got lost and couldn't find their way.

A man who lived in Nanyang named Ziji Liu was a noble character.


A man named Ziji Liu who lived in Nanyang named Ziji Liu was aof noble character. A man named Ziji Liu who lived in Nanyang was of noble character.

One day he heard this story and was very happy, so he decided to go to the Peach Garden.But he didn't find this place, either.


One day he heard this story and was very happy, so he decided to go to the Peach Garden. But he dicouldn't find this place, either. One day he heard this story and was very happy, so he decided to go to the Peach Garden. But he couldn't find this place, either.

One day he heard this story and wasbecame very happy, so he decided to go to the Peach Garden.B but he didn't find ithis place, either. One day he heard this story and became very happy, so he decided to go to the Peach Garden but he didn't find it either.

Liu died of an illness soon.


Liu died of an illness soon after. Liu died of an illness soon after.

Liu died of an illness soon thereafter. Liu died of an illness soon thereafter.

And no one come to find the Peach Garden again.


And no one come tould ever find the Peach Garden again. And no one could ever find the Peach Garden again.

And no one comewent to find the Peach Garden ever again. And no one went to find the Peach Garden ever again.

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