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Akosh

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About my hobbies and exercises

Hi!
I have so many hobbies and exercises. For example sport, reading books, study my major and wedding. About wedding, I don't have my girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old. Than my major is cyber security. I think about my major that it's the best work can I do, because I like computer, network, to save my own information and etc. About sport, my favorite sport is taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics. Finally, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies.
OK, what is your favorite hobby?


Salom!
Menda juda ko'p hobbi va qiladigan ishlarim bor. Misol uchun sport, kitob o'qish, yo'nalishimni o'rganishim va uylanish. Utlanish haqida, Menda hozircha qiz do'stim yo'q, shunga qaramay men 20 yosshga to'lganman. Mening soham kiber xavfsizlik. Soham haqida o'ylaymanki bu eng zo'r soha qaysiki men qila olaman, sababi men yoqtiram compyuter, tarmoq, malumotlarimni saqlashni va boshqalar. Sport haqida, mening yoqtirgan sportlarim bu taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess va calisthenics. Va nihoyat, men falsafa va yangi texnologiyalar haqidagi kitoblarni o'qishni yoqtiraman.
Yaxshi, Sizning yoqtirgan hobbiyingiz?

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About my hobbies and exercises

Hi!

I have so many hobbies and exercises.

Finally, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies.

OK, what is your favorite hobby?

Hi!

Finally, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies.

OK, what is your favorite hobby?

About my hobbies and exercises


About mMy hHobbies and eExercises About My Hobbies and Exercises

Title capitalization rules. A more natural title: My Hobbies and Exercise

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Hi!


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I have so many hobbies and exercises.


I have so many hobbies and exercises that I do. I have so many hobbies and exercises that I do.

We wouldn't really say we "have" exercises, it wants the verb "do"

I have so many hobbies and activities (or physical exercises.) I have so many hobbies and activities (or physical exercise)

"Exercise" means more so one specific task or a specific part of training. Exercise can mean an exercise in a workbook in school OR it can also mean exercise as in physical activity, BUT you cannot use plural for this purpose.

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Than my major is cyber security.


(Thanen) my major is cyber security. (Then) my major is cyber security.

I would remove "then" entirely here as it's not needed The spelling "than" is for comparing things. A bowling ball is bigger than a golf ball.

Than mMy major is cyber security. My major is cyber security.

Than is for comparing and "then" is for talking about time. Use furthermore, but using no connectors is natural too.

Than mMy major is cyber security. My major is cyber security.

For example sport, reading books, study my major and wedding.


For example: sports, reading books, studying for my major and (thinking about / planning) my wedding. For example: sports, reading books, studying for my major and (thinking about / planning) my wedding.

Since you are listing off things, it's good to use a colon : You need a verb for the "wedding" part; I gave two options

For example sport, reading books, study my major and wedding. For example sport, reading books, study my major and wedding.

Wedding is not a hobby

For example, sport, reading books, studying my major and wedding_______. For example, sport, reading books, studying my major and _______.

I think you used the wrong word here. Wedding is not a hobby.

For example, sports, reading books, studying my major and weddings. For example, sports, reading books, studying my major and weddings.

You need to use the plural here for nouns and the -ing form for verbs

Finally, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies.


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FinalLastly, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies. Lastly, I like reading books about philosophy and new technologies.

Finally is fine too, but lastly is better.

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About wedding, I don't have my girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old.


About my wedding, I don't have mya girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old. About my wedding, I don't have a girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old.

About wedding, I don't have my girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old. About wedding, I don't have my girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old.

Maybe use dating as a hobby or "searching for a girlfriend", because wedding is a one time ceremony, not a hobby.

About weddings, I don't have mya girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old. About weddings, I don't have a girlfriend yet, but I'm already 20 years old.

I think about my major that it's the best work can I do, because I like computer, network, to save my own information and etc.


I think abouthat my major that it'is the best work i can I do, because I like computer, network, to save my own information and etc. I think that my major is the best work i can do, because I like computer, network, to save my own information and etc.

This form of sentense is better

I think about my major that it'sis for the best work can I do, because I like computers, networks, to savesaving my own information and, etc. I think my major is for the best work can I do, because I like computers, networks, saving my own information, etc.

No need for "and" before "etc."

I think about my major that it'scan lead me to the best work can I dofor me, because I like computers, networks, to savesaving my own information and, etc. I think my major can lead me to the best work for me, because I like computers, networks, saving my own information, etc.

A bit of a messy start for the sentence. At the end, you have to use "etc." without "and" OR you can use "and more" or "and so on".

I think about my major that it'is the best work can I do, because I like computers, networks, to save my own information and, etc. I think my major is the best work can I do, because I like computers, networks, to save my own information, etc.

About sport, my favorite sport is taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics.


About sports, my favorite sport is ts are Taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics. About sports, my favorite sports are Taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics.

You are listing multiple sports, so "my favorite sports are" Taekwondo is typically capitalized

About sportRegarding sport (or maybe "physical activity"), my favorite sport iss are taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics. Regarding sport (or maybe "physical activity"), my favorite sports are taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics.

"About" isn't the best word here.

About sports, my favorite sport is taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics. About sports, my favorite sport is taekwondo, body building, swimming, volleyball, basketball, chess and calisthenics.

OK, what is your favorite hobby?


OK, what is your favorite hobby? OK, what is your favorite hobby?

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OKNow (or Alright then), what is your favorite hobby? Now (or Alright then), what is your favorite hobby?

Fine as it was, but a bit more natural and smooth this way.

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