Jan. 3, 2021
TV programs and our society today
TV programs have been reducing their quality since ten or fifteen years ago - but on the past were not good neither. The only topics that they talk about are silly things, and provide doubtedly news.
So, I started to wonder: are there some other things which are worst than ever before? In fact there are some things: political speeches, for example, which are more and more focus on to appeal to feelings, rather than to the reason.
The only topics that they talk about are silly things, and provide doubtedlyse days, they do not provide reliable news.¶
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and these days do not provide reliable news.
I'm correcting only this part because I noticed Deborah already did an excellent job. I think it's better to split this part into another sentence.
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I agree. Personally, I don't really like Reality TV. It's everywhere and defeats the point of being "real" if it's just scripted.
Jan. 3, 2021
Thanks a lot!
TV programs have been reducing their quality sincefor the last ten or fifteen years ago - but o. However, in the past they were not good nreat either.
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silly is a very general word - it is better to use something more precise. Not sure what doubtedly news means
So, I started to wonder: are there some other things which are worste than ever before? or ' are the worst'
things are - in increasing severity - bad, worse and worst
In fact there are some things: For example political speeches, for example, which are more and more focused on to appealing to feelings, rather than to the reasongiving facts or evidence.
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So true. Best wishes for your studies
Jan. 3, 2021
Thanks a lot!
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TV programs and our society today |
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TV programs have been reducing their quality since ten or fifteen years ago - but on the past were not good neither. TV programs have been reducing their quality |
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The only topics that they talk about are silly things, and provide doubtedly news. The only topics silly is a very general word - it is better to use something more precise. Not sure what doubtedly news means The I'm correcting only this part because I noticed Deborah already did an excellent job. I think it's better to split this part into another sentence. |
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So, I started to wonder: are there some other things which are worst than ever before? So, I started to wonder: are there some other things which are wors things are - in increasing severity - bad, worse and worst |
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In fact there are some things: political speeches, for example, which are more and more focus on to appeal to feelings, rather than to the reason. In fact there are some things: For example political speeches, |
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