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My sad experience

Hi there! I’m continue my writing adventure. Today I decided to go at the countryside. Honestly, we have a bad weather, it’s rainy, but it didn’t stop me. I think it is more cool and good for me to be at the nature, than in a flat in Moscow.
I wanted to share with you my sad experience. Recently I fell in love with one guy, and we have a nice communication, I even offered him to practice English together, we met and went for a walk in park and he was very intelligent with me and kind. But after that he didn’t write to me, didn’t, you know, do a first step. I think, he is not interested in me in romantic contest, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English etc. At fist I had a lot of pain, but after, I think, I let it go. We can be just the friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk.
The good news - I believe that everyone already has his person, it is just matter of time. And I need to respect people’s freedom. They have a right don’t choose me.
So there is sad story for today. But now I am with my family in great house, and now I am feeling relaxation. Nature always helps me coping with struggles. Today we even have a sun, but my phone said that there will be rain all day. So I’m glad to God for every single day.

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My sad experience

Hi there!

And I need to respect people’s freedom.

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Hi there!

I wanted to share with you my sad experience.

The good news - I believe that everyone already has his person, it is just matter of time.

And I need to respect people’s freedom.

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My sad experience


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Hi there!


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I think, he is not interested in me in romantic contest, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English etc.


I think, that he is not interested in me in romantic contestally, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English etc. I think that he is not interested in me romantically, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English etc.

I think, he is not interested in me in romantic contestally, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English, etc. I think he is not interested in me romantically, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English, etc.

I think, that he is not interested in me in a romantic contestway, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English, etc. I think that he is not interested in me in a romantic way, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English, etc.

You meant to say "romantic context" but "interested in/see someone in a romantic way" is more common

We can be just the friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk.


We can be just thbe friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk. We can just be friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk.

We can be just the friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk. We can be just friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk.

We can be just the friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk. We can be just friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk.

We can be just the friends (we also work together at the same job) and talk sometimes talk. We can be just friends (we also work together at the same job) and talk sometimes.

The good news - I believe that everyone already has his person, it is just matter of time.


The good news - I believe that everyone already has histheir person, it is just a matter of time. The good news - I believe that everyone already has their person, it is just a matter of time.

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The good news - I believe that everyone already has histheir person, it is just matter of time. The good news - I believe that everyone already has their person, it is just matter of time.

For unknown/any gender use "their"

The good news - I believe that everyone already has his/her person, it is just matter of time. The good news - I believe that everyone already has his/her person, it is just matter of time.

And I need to respect people’s freedom.


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I’m continue my writing adventure.


I’m continue mying to writinge my adventure. I’m continuing to write my adventure.

I’m continueing my writing adventure. I’m continuing my writing adventure.

Alternative: I'm here to continue my writing adventure

I’m continueing my writing adventure. I’m continuing my writing adventure.

Present continuous - "I am ___ing"

Today I decided to go at the countryside.


Today, I decided to go ato the countryside. Today, I decided to go to the countryside.

We go "to" places

Today, I decided to go ato the countryside. Today, I decided to go to the countryside.

Today I decided to go ato the countryside. Today I decided to go to the countryside.

Today I decided to go ato the countryside. Today I decided to go to the countryside.

Honestly, we have a bad weather, it’s rainy, but it didn’t stop me.


Honestly, we have ahad bad weather, it’s has been rainying, but ithat didn’t stop me. Honestly, we have had bad weather, it has been raining, but that didn’t stop me.

Honestly, we have a bad weather, (it’s rainy), but ithat didn’t stop me. Honestly, we have bad weather (it’s rainy), but that didn’t stop me.

"That didn't stop me" is a bit more natural here

Honestly, we have ad bad weather, it’. It was rainy, but it didn’t stop me. Honestly, we had bad weather. It was rainy, but it didn’t stop me.

Honestly, we have a bad weather here, it’s rainy, but it didn’t stop me. Honestly, we have a bad weather here, it’s rainy, but it didn’t stop me.

I think it is more cool and good for me to be at the nature, than in a flat in Moscow.


I think it is more cool and good for me to be ait the nature, than in a flat in Moscow. I think it is more cool and good for me to be it the nature, than in a flat in Moscow.

I think it is more cooler and goodbetter for me to be at thein nature, than in a flat in Moscow. I think it is cooler and better for me to be in nature than in a flat in Moscow.

Since you are making comparisons (being in the countryside vs. being in Moscow) => cooler and better

I think that it is more cooler and goodbetter for me to be at thein nature, than in a flat in Moscow. I think that it is cooler and better for me to be in nature than in a flat in Moscow.

If a word can be said as "____er," then that is used for comparison rather than "more ____" (the comparative form for "good" is "better")

I wanted to share with you my sad experience.


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I wanted to share with you my sad experience with you. I wanted to share my sad experience with you.

Changed the order to sound more natural

Recently I fell in love with one guy, and we have a nice communication, I even offered him to practice English together, we met and went for a walk in park and he was very intelligent with me and kind.


Recently I fell in love with onea guy, and we haved a nice communicnversation, I even offered him to practice English together, w. We met and went for a walk in the park and he was very intelligent with me and kind with me. Recently I fell in love with a guy, and we had a nice conversation, I even offered him to practice English together. We met and went for a walk in the park and he was very intelligent and kind with me.

Recently, I fell in love with onea guy, and we have a nice communication,were getting along well. I even offered him to practice English together, wwith him. We met and went for a walk in/at the park and he was very intelligent with me and kind with me. Recently, I fell in love with a guy, and we were getting along well. I even offered to practice English with him. We met and went for a walk in/at the park and he was very intelligent and kind with me.

We say "one" when we are insisting on focusing on the number/quantity of something. Otherwise, in everyday speech, use "a." Describing your early relationship going well could be "getting along well."

Recently I fell in love with one guy, and we haved a nice communicannection,. I even offered him to practice English together, wwith him. We met and went for a walk in park, and he was very intelligent with me and kind. Recently I fell in love with one guy, and we had a nice connection. I even offered to practice English with him. We met and went for a walk in park, and he was very intelligent and kind.

But after that he didn’t write to me, didn’t, you know, do a first step.


But after that, he didn’t write to me, didn’t, you know, he didn't do athe first step. But after that, he didn’t write to me, you know, he didn't do the first step.

But after that, he didn’t write to me,. He didn’t, you know, do a first step/make a move. But after that, he didn’t write to me. He didn’t, you know, do a first step/make a move.

Taking a romantic initiative is often described as "making a move"

But after that he didn’t write to me, didn’t, you know, do atake the first step. But after that he didn’t write to me, didn’t, you know, take the first step.

The phrase is "take the first step" for when you want someone to move your relationship farther

At fist I had a lot of pain, but after, I think, I let it go.


At first I had a lot of pain, but after, it (really) hurt, but eventually, I think, I let it gogot over it. At first, it (really) hurt, but eventually, I think, I got over it.

Enduring a difficult experience and eventually feeling better can be described as "getting over it" or "moving on"

At first, I hadwas in a lot of pain, but after that, I think, Iough that I should let it go. At first, I was in a lot of pain, but after that, I though that I should let it go.

At first I had a lot of pain, but after, I think, I let it go. At first I had a lot of pain, but after, I think, I let it go.

At first I had a lot of pain, but soon after, I think, I let it go. At first I had a lot of pain, but soon after, I let it go.

They have a right don’t choose me.


They have a right don’to not choose me. They have a right to not choose me.

They have a right don’to not choose me. They have a right to not choose me.

They have a right don’to not choose me. They have a right to not choose me.

They have a right don’to not choose me. They have a right to not choose me.

So there is sad story for today.


So, there isis is the sad story for today. So, this is the sad story for today.

So there is my sad story for today. So there is my sad story for today.

So there is sad story for today. So here is sad story for today.

So there isat is the sad story for today. So that is the sad story for today.

But now I am with my family in great house, and now I am feeling relaxation.


But now, I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relaxationed. But now, I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relaxed.

But now I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relaxationed. But now I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relaxed.

But now I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relaxationed. But now I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relaxed.

"Relaxed" is an adjective (or verb in past tense, but not for this context) and "relaxation" is a noun

But now I am with my family in great house, and now I am feeling relaxationed. But now I am with my family in great house, and now I am feeling relaxed.

Nature always helps me coping with struggles.


Nature always helps me copingto cope with my struggles. Nature always helps me to cope with my struggles.

Nature always helps me copingto cope with my struggles. Nature always helps me to cope with my struggles.

Nature always helps me copinge with struggles. Nature always helps me cope with struggles.

Nature always helps me copinge with struggles. Nature always helps me cope with struggles.

Today we even have a sun, but my phone said that there will be rain all day.


Today, we even have athe sun, but my phone said that there will be rain all day. Today, we even have the sun, but my phone said that there will be rain all day.

Today, we even have a sun, but my phone said that there willould be rain all day. Today, we even have sun, but my phone said that there would be rain all day.

Today we, even have a sunthe sun is out, but my phone said that there will be rain all day. Today, even the sun is out, but my phone said that there will be rain all day.

So I’m glad to God for every single day.


So, I’m gladrateful to God for every single day. So, I’m grateful to God for every single day.

So I’m gladthankful/grateful to God for every single day. So I’m thankful/grateful to God for every single day.

These are better descriptions for this sentence

So I’m glad/grateful to God for every single day. So I’m glad/grateful to God for every single day.

I'm not entirely sure if "glad" can be used like this, but "grateful" makes more sense

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