June 13, 2026
I can't remember the first time I ever won, but I do remember an argument I won when I was a senior high school student. I had trouble getting good grades in math, so my mom wanted me to attend a cram school -- using my spare time, of course. The problem was: I only had one day off every two weeks. So I didn't want to go.
We had a big argument, and in the end I said something like, "You don't care about my opinions." She looked very annoyed and hurt, and said:, "Fine. Do whatever you want." I won the argument and didn't need to attend cram school, but I felt terrible at that time.
That was a long time ago. I don't know whether to say lucky or unlucky, but neither of us cares about that argument now -- because obviously a better math grade can't help me find a job easily at all.
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This reads fine as it is to me :)
I can't remember the very first time I ever won, but I do remember an argument I won when I was a senior high school student.
I can't remember the very first time, but I do remember an argument I won when I was a senior high school student.
A little redundant.
The problem was: that
The problem was that
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I only had one day off every two weeks.,
I only had one day off every two weeks,
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Sso I didn't want to go.
so I didn't want to go.
3 fragments that sound more natural combined.
She looked very annoyed and hurt, and said:, "Fine.
She looked very annoyed and hurt, and said, "Fine.
I don't know whether to say it was lucky or unlucky, but neither of us cares about that argument now -- because obviously a better math grade can't help me find a job easily at all. I don't know whether to say it was lucky or unlucky, but neither of us cares about that argument now -- because obviously a better math grade can't help me find a job easily at all.
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Great job!
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I can't remember the first time I ever won, but I do remember an argument I won when I was a senior high school student.
I can't remember the very first time A little redundant. |
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I had trouble getting good grades in math, so my mom wanted me to attend a cram school -- using my spare time, of course. |
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The problem was:
The problem was 3 fragments that sound more natural combined. |
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I only had one day off every two weeks.
I only had one day off every two weeks 3 fragments that sound more natural combined. |
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So I didn't want to go.
3 fragments that sound more natural combined. |
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We had a big argument, and in the end I said something like, "You don't care about my opinions." |
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She looked very annoyed and hurt, and said:, "Fine.
She looked very annoyed and hurt, and said |
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Do whatever you want." |
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I won the argument and didn't need to attend cram school, but I felt terrible at that time. |
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That was a long time ago. |
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I don't know whether to say lucky or unlucky, but neither of us cares about that argument now -- because obviously a better math grade can't help me find a job easily at all. I don't know whether to say it was lucky or unlucky, but neither of us cares about that argument now -- because obviously a better math grade can't help me find a job easily at all. I don't know whether to say it was lucky or unlucky, but neither of us cares about that argument now -- because obviously a better math grade can't help me find a job easily at all. |
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