April 2, 2025
tuti's diary
"Hello again, again here to share my little routine with you, Tuti. You are my best friend and I hold you in great consideration and pleasure. Yesterday, I didn't work on my journalist app, but let's go, I need to improve my skills, especially my writing. I did my thing on Monday, for example, I rested a lot. I listened to my English and Japanese playlists, and so on. To summarize today, I just studied English and Japanese, and I rested in my room, in my bed.
Hello, now it's time to say what I did today. I woke up around 8:30 am, and when I woke up, Deise's children were here at my house. These kids love me so much. In the morning, I went to the supermarket with the children, where I bought passion fruit and condensed milk. After that, I returned home, had dinner, hung out with them, and played video games. What we did during the afternoon was watch a movie called 'His Name is Woman' (the movie tells the story about a man who made himself a chocolate factory; it's an interesting movie). Now, we're playing video games, specifically 'Stray Cats'." This is my day friend, take care, see you tomorrow.
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I like writing is English, there is some mistake on it? In this text above.
"Olá de novo, estou aqui mais uma vez para compartilhar minha pequena rotina com você, Tuti. Você é minha melhor amiga e tenho grande compreensão e prazer em tê-la por perto. Ontem, não trabalhei no meu aplicativo de jornalista, mas aqui estamos, preciso melhorar minhas habilidades, especialmente minha escrita. Fiz minha parte na segunda-feira, por exemplo, descansei bastante. Ouvi minhas playlists em inglês e japonês, e assim por diante. Para resumir o dia de hoje, só estudei inglês e japonês, e descansei no meu quarto, na minha cama.
Olá, agora é hora de contar o que fiz hoje. Acordei por volta das 8h30, e quando acordei, os filhos da Deise estavam aqui em casa. Essas crianças me amam muito. Pela manhã, fui ao supermercado com as crianças, onde comprei maracujá e leite condensado. Depois disso, voltei para casa, jantei, fiquei com elas e joguei videogame. O que fizemos à tarde foi assistir a um filme chamado 'O Nome Dele é Mulher' (o filme conta a história de um homem que construiu uma fábrica de chocolate; é um filme interessante). Agora, estamos jogando videogame, especificamente 'Stray Cats.' Este foi o meu dia, amigo, cuide-se, até amanhã.
"Hello again, I'm here again here to share my little routine with you, Tuti.
You are my best friend and I hold you in great consideration and pleasure.
Yesterday, I didn't work on my journalist app, but let's go,. I need to improve my skills, especially my writing.
I did my thing on Monday, f. For example, I rested a lot.
I listened to my English and Japanese playlists, and so on.
To summarize today, I just studied English and Japanese, and I rested in my room, in my bed.
"To summarize" isn't incorrect, but it sounds unnatural.
Hello, nNow it's time to say what I did today.
I woke up around 8:30 am, and when I woke up, Deise's children were here, at my house.
These kids love me so much.
In the morning, I went to the supermarket with the children, where I bought passion fruit and condensed milk.
After that, I returned home, had dinner, hung out with them, and played video games.
What we did during the afternoon was watch a movie called 'His Name is Woman' (the movie tells the story about a man who made himself a chocolate factory; it's an interesting movie).
Now, we're playing video games, specifically 'Stray Cats'."
This iat was my day, friend, t. Take care, see you tomorrow.
20:45 -03
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I like writing isn English, are there is someany mistake os in it?
In this text above.
Feedback
good job :)
"Hello again, I'm here again here to share my little routine with you, Tuti.
You are my best friend and I hold you in great consideration and pleasure.truly appreciate and value our friendship
I understood what you meant in your sentence but reworded it entirely to sound more natural.
Yesterday, I didn't work on my journalist app, but let's go,! I need to improve my skills, especially my writing.
I did my own thing on Monday, f. For example, I rested a lot.
I listened to my English and Japanese playlists, and so on.
To summarize today, I just studied English and Japanese, and I rested in my room, in my bed.
adding the "today" in this sentence makes it sound like you are summarizing what you did today, and if I am understanding correctly, you are summarizing a different day, correct? Also at least in my area (the Midwest USA) we would assume that if you rested in your room, you were likely in your bed, so you don't need the clarification.
Hello, now it's time to say what I did today.
I woke up around 8:30 am, and when I woke up, Deise's children were here at my house.
These kids love me so much.
In the morning, I went to the supermarket with the children, where I bought passion fruit and condensed milk at the supermarket with the children .
There's nothing wrong with the way you wrote this originally, my correction is just to sound a little more natural :)
After that, I returned home, had dinner, hung out with them, and played video games.
What we did duringIn the afternoon wase watched a movie called 'His Name is Woman' (the moviewhich tells the story aboutof a man who made himself a chocolate factory; it's an interesting movie).
again, only correcting for natural flow here!
Now, we're playing video games, specifically 'Stray Cats'."
This iat was my day, friend, t. Take care, and see you tomorrow.
20:45 -03
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I like writing isn English,. Are there is someany mistake os in it?
In this text above.
"Hello again, againI'm here to share my little routine with you once again, Tuti.
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I like writing isn English, is there is some mistake on it?
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You are my best friend and I hold you in great consideration and pleasure. You are my best friend and I I understood what you meant in your sentence but reworded it entirely to sound more natural. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday, I didn't work on my journalist app, but let's go, I need to improve my skills, especially my writing. Yesterday, I didn't work on my journalist app, but let's go Yesterday, I didn't work on my journalist app, but let's go |
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I did my thing on Monday, for example, I rested a lot. I did my own thing on Monday I did my thing on Monday |
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I listened to my English and Japanese playlists, and so on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To summarize today, I just studied English and Japanese, and I rested in my room, in my bed. To summarize adding the "today" in this sentence makes it sound like you are summarizing what you did today, and if I am understanding correctly, you are summarizing a different day, correct? Also at least in my area (the Midwest USA) we would assume that if you rested in your room, you were likely in your bed, so you don't need the clarification. To "To summarize" isn't incorrect, but it sounds unnatural. |
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Hello, now it's time to say what I did today. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I woke up around 8:30 am, and when I woke up, Deise's children were here at my house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I woke up around 8:30 am |
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These kids love me so much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the morning, I went to the supermarket with the children, where I bought passion fruit and condensed milk. In the morning, I There's nothing wrong with the way you wrote this originally, my correction is just to sound a little more natural :) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After that, I returned home, had dinner, hung out with them, and played video games. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What we did during the afternoon was watch a movie called 'His Name is Woman' (the movie tells the story about a man who made himself a chocolate factory; it's an interesting movie).
again, only correcting for natural flow here! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now, we're playing video games, specifically 'Stray Cats'." This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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