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Turkiye trip

This summer is unbelievable. Im traveler to Turkey this summer. I visit to Istanbul and Ankara. Okay i tell abaout Ankara first: Ankara is capital of Turkiye. I visit anitkabir. Anitkabir is so big and there were a lot of soldiers there. I saw the car and cemetery of Ataturk, the first president of Turkiye. I didnt spend much there because Ankara is so hot. Anyways im going to restaurant name is: Kanatci ayaz. Wings are delicious. i have never eaten such a good wings. Restaurant close to Macunköy subway station and i recommending to go there.

You know Istanbul. Istanbul have good view and place: Fatih Sultan Mehmet Mosque, Bogazici bridge, Footbal stations ana Taksim. But my favorite place is Fenerbahce station. I went to Fenrbahce station watch to match. The match was a Champion league qualifying match Feyenoord vs Fenerbahce. But im honest turkish fans are so crazy and all 90 minute they have amazing atmosphere. I did bothing but cover my ears. Match end 5-2 Fenerbahce won. After i eat Kebab random restaurant. Thats my summer BYE.

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This summer iwas unbelievable.

You're talking about the summer that just went by, so "was" is used to put it in the past tense

Im travelerd to Turkey this summer.

"traveler" is a noun and refers to a person who travels. "traveled" is an action (in the past tense).

I visit toed Istanbul and Ankara.

Since you haven't

Okay i tellI will talk abaout Ankara first: Ankara is the capital of Turkiye.

"tell" requires a target. So you can say "I will tell you about Ankara first" but not just "I will tell about Ankara first". It's better to use "talk" when you don't want to mention the target.

I visit aed Anitkabir.

Place names are proper nouns, so are capitalised

Anitkabir is sovery big and there were a lot of soldiers there.

I didn't spend much(long / much time) there because Ankara is so hot.

"much" on its own is ambiguous between money or time, so better to add more words to clarify.

Anyways im goingI went to a restaurant name is:d Kanatci ayaz.

WTheir wings arweree delicious.

"Wings are delicious" is just a statement about all wings, not specifically about the wings that the restaurant sold

iI have never eaten such a good wings.

"wings" is plural, so doesn't take "a"

RIt is a restaurant close to Macunköy subway station and iI recommending to going there.

You know Istanbul.

I think you need more here, because you're just declaring that the reader is knowledgeable about Istanbul with this statement, which is grammatically valid, just weird.

Istanbul haves good views and places: Fatih Sultan Mehmet Mosque, Bogazici bridge, Footbal stations ana Taksim.

I went to Fenrbahce station to watch toa match.

The match was a Champion league qualifying match: Feyenoord vs Fenerbahce.

But im honest tly Turkish fans are so crazy and throughout all 90 minutes they haved amazing atmosphere.

I did bnothing but cover my ears.

MThe match ended 5-2 - Fenerbahce won.

After i eat Kebabthat I are at a random Kebab restaurant.

That was my summer BYE, bye.

This summer iwas unbelievable.

Im travelerd to Turkey this summer.

You could say "I was a traveler" instead but it sounds a lot more natural this way.

I visit toed Istanbul and Ankara.

Okay iI will tell you abaout Ankara first:. Ankara is the capital of Turkiye.

I visit aed Anitkabir.

Anitkabir is so big and there were a lot of soldiers there.

I saw the car and cemetery of Ataturk, the first president of Turkiye.

Assuming you mean "grave" here instead of "cemetery", but I didn't change it because you could have also meant "cemetery where he's buried" - it would depend on if you saw his specific grave or just the overall cemetery.

I didn't spend much time there because Ankara is so hot.

Anyways im going I went to a restaurant name is:called Kanatci ayaz.

"Anyways" is a very casual form that is technically incorrect but you sometimes do hear it among friends anyway, especially younger people.

WThe wings awere delicious.

Your original sentence would actually have been perfect if you were speaking just in general, but since you are discussing a specific restaurant experience, this is the better sentence.

iI have never eaten such a good wings.

RThe restaurant is close to Macunköy subway station and iI recommending to you go there.

You know Istanbul.

This functions again in a very informal situation, but a more polished way to say it is, "You are probably familiar with Istanbul."

Istanbul haves good view and places: Fatih Sultan Mehmet Mosque, Bogazici bridge, Ffootball stationdiums anad Taksim.

But my favorite place is Fenerbahce stationdium.

I went to the Fenrbahce stationdium to watch toa match.

The match was a Champion league qualifying match between Feyenoord vsand Fenerbahce.

But if I'm honest tTurkish fans are so crazy and all 90 minutes, they haved an amazing atmosphere.

I did bnothing but cover my ears.

Match end 5-2At the end of the match Fenerbahce won 5-2.

After i eat Kebabthat I ate at a random Kebab restaurant.

That was my summer. BYE.ye!

This summer is unbelievable.


This summer iwas unbelievable.

This summer iwas unbelievable.

You're talking about the summer that just went by, so "was" is used to put it in the past tense

Im traveler to Turkey this summer.


Im travelerd to Turkey this summer.

You could say "I was a traveler" instead but it sounds a lot more natural this way.

Im travelerd to Turkey this summer.

"traveler" is a noun and refers to a person who travels. "traveled" is an action (in the past tense).

I visit to Istanbul and Ankara.


I visit toed Istanbul and Ankara.

I visit toed Istanbul and Ankara.

Since you haven't

Okay i tell abaout Ankara first: Ankara is capital of Turkiye.


Okay iI will tell you abaout Ankara first:. Ankara is the capital of Turkiye.

Okay i tellI will talk abaout Ankara first: Ankara is the capital of Turkiye.

"tell" requires a target. So you can say "I will tell you about Ankara first" but not just "I will tell about Ankara first". It's better to use "talk" when you don't want to mention the target.

I visit anitkabir.


I visit aed Anitkabir.

I visit aed Anitkabir.

Place names are proper nouns, so are capitalised

Anitkabir is so big and there were a lot of soldiers there.


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Anitkabir is sovery big and there were a lot of soldiers there.

I saw the car and cemetery of Ataturk, the first president of Turkiye.


I saw the car and cemetery of Ataturk, the first president of Turkiye.

Assuming you mean "grave" here instead of "cemetery", but I didn't change it because you could have also meant "cemetery where he's buried" - it would depend on if you saw his specific grave or just the overall cemetery.

I didnt spend much there because Ankara is so hot.


I didn't spend much time there because Ankara is so hot.

I didn't spend much(long / much time) there because Ankara is so hot.

"much" on its own is ambiguous between money or time, so better to add more words to clarify.

Anyways im going to restaurant name is: Kanatci ayaz.


Anyways im going I went to a restaurant name is:called Kanatci ayaz.

"Anyways" is a very casual form that is technically incorrect but you sometimes do hear it among friends anyway, especially younger people.

Anyways im goingI went to a restaurant name is:d Kanatci ayaz.

You know Istanbul.


You know Istanbul.

This functions again in a very informal situation, but a more polished way to say it is, "You are probably familiar with Istanbul."

You know Istanbul.

I think you need more here, because you're just declaring that the reader is knowledgeable about Istanbul with this statement, which is grammatically valid, just weird.

Istanbul have good view and place: Fatih Sultan Mehmet Mosque, Bogazici bridge, Footbal stations ana Taksim.


Istanbul haves good view and places: Fatih Sultan Mehmet Mosque, Bogazici bridge, Ffootball stationdiums anad Taksim.

Istanbul haves good views and places: Fatih Sultan Mehmet Mosque, Bogazici bridge, Footbal stations ana Taksim.

But my favorite place is Fenerbahce station.


But my favorite place is Fenerbahce stationdium.

I went to Fenrbahce station watch to match.


I went to the Fenrbahce stationdium to watch toa match.

I went to Fenrbahce station to watch toa match.

The match was a Champion league qualifying match Feyenoord vs Fenerbahce.


The match was a Champion league qualifying match between Feyenoord vsand Fenerbahce.

The match was a Champion league qualifying match: Feyenoord vs Fenerbahce.

Turkiye trip


But im honest turkish fans are so crazy and all 90 minute they have amazing atmosphere.


But if I'm honest tTurkish fans are so crazy and all 90 minutes, they haved an amazing atmosphere.

But im honest tly Turkish fans are so crazy and throughout all 90 minutes they haved amazing atmosphere.

I did bothing but cover my ears.


I did bnothing but cover my ears.

I did bnothing but cover my ears.

Match end 5-2 Fenerbahce won.


Match end 5-2At the end of the match Fenerbahce won 5-2.

MThe match ended 5-2 - Fenerbahce won.

After i eat Kebab random restaurant.


After i eat Kebabthat I ate at a random Kebab restaurant.

After i eat Kebabthat I are at a random Kebab restaurant.

Thats my summer BYE.


That was my summer. BYE.ye!

That was my summer BYE, bye.

Wings are delicious.


WThe wings awere delicious.

Your original sentence would actually have been perfect if you were speaking just in general, but since you are discussing a specific restaurant experience, this is the better sentence.

WTheir wings arweree delicious.

"Wings are delicious" is just a statement about all wings, not specifically about the wings that the restaurant sold

i have never eaten such a good wings.


iI have never eaten such a good wings.

iI have never eaten such a good wings.

"wings" is plural, so doesn't take "a"

Restaurant close to Macunköy subway station and i recommending to go there.


RThe restaurant is close to Macunköy subway station and iI recommending to you go there.

RIt is a restaurant close to Macunköy subway station and iI recommending to going there.

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