June 6, 2026
The story so far As a quick recap, earlier that evening, we had been going to a famous café that my eldest daughter had been looking forward to, but it had already closed by 8 p.m. As an alternative, we decided to go to a restaurant famous for serving traditional Czech raw meat dishes. Unfortunately, the hamburger served to my younger daughter was so undercooked that she simply couldn't eat it, and she became very upset.
After dinner, we stopped by a supermarket to buy some souvenirs. Since we were heading home on the following day, that evening was our last chance to pick up souvenirs at reasonable prices.
My younger daughter was in a bad mood the entire time.
夕食を終え、お土産を買うためにスーパーに立ち寄った。明日は帰国の途につくのでお土産を安く買うには今晩が最後だった。
次女は終始不機嫌だった。
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As a quick recap, earlier that evening, we had been going to a famous café that my eldest daughter had been looking forward to, but it had already closed by 8 p.m.
SMOOTHER: As an alternative, we decided to go to a restaurant famous for servingits traditional Czech raw meat dishes.
SMOOTHER: As an alternative, we decided to go to a restaurant famous for its traditional Czech raw meat dishes.
Unfortunately, the hamburger served to my younger daughter was so undercooked that she simply couldn't eat it, and she became very upset.
After dinner, we stopped by a supermarket to buy some souvenirs.
Since we were heading home on the following day, that evening was our last chance to pick up souvenirs at reasonable prices.
My younger daughter was in a bad mood the entire time.
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Ah, family dramas! It is very tough being a parent, isn't it?
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The story so far: The story so far:
As a quick recap, earlier that evening, we had beenwere going to a famous café that my eldest daughter had been looking forward to visiting, but it had already closed byat 8 p.m.
As a quick recap, earlier that evening, we were going to a famous café that my eldest daughter had been looking forward to visiting, but it had already closed at 8 p.m.
As an alternative, we decided to go to a restaurant famous for serving traditional Czech raw meat dishes.
Unfortunately, the hamburger that was served to my younger daughter was so under-cooked that she simply couldn't eat it, andso she became very upset.
Unfortunately, the hamburger that was served to my younger daughter was so under-cooked that she simply couldn't eat it, so she became very upset.
After dinner, we stopped by a supermarket to buy some souvenirs.
Since we were heading home on the following day, that evening was our last chance to pick upbuy souvenirs at a reasonable prices.
Since we were heading home the following day, that evening was our last chance to buy souvenirs at a reasonable price.
My younger daughter was in a bad mood the entire time.
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The story so far... The story so far...
As a quick recap, earlier that evening, we had been going to a famous café that my eldest daughter had been looking forward to, but it had already closed by 8 p.m.
As an alternative, we decided to go to a restaurant famous for serving traditional Czech raw meat dishes.
Unfortunately, the hamburger served to my younger daughter was so undercooked that she simply couldn't eat it, and she became very upset.
After dinner, we stopped by a supermarket to buy some souvenirs.
Since we were heading home on the following day, that evening was our last chance to pick up souvenirs at reasonable prices.
My younger daughter was in a bad mood the entire time.
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