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Hello, my name is Branca. I was born in Paulo Afonso, in the state of Bahia. Actually, live in Maceió, in the state of Alagoas. This city is a paradise of the water, The color of the Sea is beautiful. Brazilian Caribbean. I love living here. I enjoy living here. Come and see Maceió. It' s totally worth It.
Personal PresentationIntroduction
This city is a paradise ofon the water,
The color of the Seasea is beautiful.
ActuallyHowever, I actually live in Maceió, in the state of Alagoas.
I think this sounds much more natural, since "however" helps to show the contrast between your previous sentence and this one.
The color of the Seasea is beautiful.
It's like a Brazilian Caribbean.
"Brazilian Caribbean" is not a sentence by itself.
It' sIt's totally worth Itit.
Overall feedback
I just googled it and it really does look amazing!
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