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Dec. 26, 2021

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Trying to write a story

Kyle was sitting on his laptop. Legs crossed and closing, his hands occasionally due to the cold Christmas night. It was about time for him to start writing, and he had quite an ambitious project in mind. His son entered the room.

Johnny could you get me that pen please - said Kyle keeping his eyes on the laptop.

Sure dad. Here you are - said Johnny handing the pen to his dad.

Dad, May I…. tried to ask Johnny

English please - interrupted his dad.

Oh, sorry for that, may I get this 1 euro coin that you left here on this shelf?. Johnny knew that he couldn't take any coins without his father's consent even if he knew he could steal them and they wouldn't even realize.

Sure. I'm happy that you asked this time - said his father who was also happy for his son's improvement in English in the recent weeks.

Now please leave me alone since I need some inspiration here and you´re distracting me - Said Kyle with a serious face.

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Trying to write a story

Kyle was sitting onat his laptop.

Legs crossed and closing, his hands occasionally due to the cold Christmas night.

It was about time for him to start writing, and he had quite an ambitious project in mind.

His son entered the room.

"Johnny, could you get me that pen, please -," said Kyle, keeping his eyes on the laptop.

"Sure dad."

"Here you are," - said Johnny, handing the pen to his dad.

"Dad, Mmay I….,"

Johnny tried to ask Johnny.

"English please," his dad - interrupted his dad.

"Oh, sorry forabout that, m. May I get this 1 euro coin that you left here on this shelf?."

Johnny knew that he couldn't take any coins without his father's consent, even if he knew he could steal them and they wouldn't even realize.

"Sure."

"I'm happyglad that you asked this time," - said his father, who was also happy forabout his son's improvement in English in the recent weeks.

"Now please leave me alone since I need some inspiration here and you´'re distracting me - S," said Kyle with a serious face.

Trying to write a story


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Kyle was sitting on his laptop.


Kyle was sitting onat his laptop.

Legs crossed and closing, his hands occasionally due to the cold Christmas night.


Legs crossed and closing, his hands occasionally due to the cold Christmas night.

It was about time for him to start writing, and he had quite an ambitious project in mind.


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His son entered the room.


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Johnny could you get me that pen please - said Kyle keeping his eyes on the laptop.


"Johnny, could you get me that pen, please -," said Kyle, keeping his eyes on the laptop.

Sure dad.


"Sure dad."

Here you are - said Johnny handing the pen to his dad.


"Here you are," - said Johnny, handing the pen to his dad.

Dad, May I….


"Dad, Mmay I….,"

tried to ask Johnny


Johnny tried to ask Johnny.

English please - interrupted his dad.


"English please," his dad - interrupted his dad.

Oh, sorry for that, may I get this 1 euro coin that you left here on this shelf?.


"Oh, sorry forabout that, m. May I get this 1 euro coin that you left here on this shelf?."

Johnny knew that he couldn't take any coins without his father's consent even if he knew he could steal them and they wouldn't even realize.


Johnny knew that he couldn't take any coins without his father's consent, even if he knew he could steal them and they wouldn't even realize.

Sure.


"Sure."

I'm happy that you asked this time - said his father who was also happy for his son's improvement in English in the recent weeks.


"I'm happyglad that you asked this time," - said his father, who was also happy forabout his son's improvement in English in the recent weeks.

Now please leave me alone since I need some inspiration here and you´re distracting me - Said Kyle with a serious face.


"Now please leave me alone since I need some inspiration here and you´'re distracting me - S," said Kyle with a serious face.

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