Jan. 9, 2022
Trying to get a better life
I left school when I was younger due to my mental illness. And now, I am struggling to live my life like any normal person having a good job. This year, I've read some books about entrepreneurship and started to have some ideas about establishing businesses. I'm going to apply what I've read on my first business in the hope that it thrives. I believe in self-education so much!
I left school when I was younger due to myearly due to having a mental illness.
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And nNow, I am strugglinge to live my life like anya normal personlife by having a good job.
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This year, I've read some books about entrepreneurship and started to have some ideas about establishing a businesses.
I'm going to apply what I've read ton my first business in the hope that it thrives.
I strongly believe in self-education so much!.
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Well done and great topic, not sure if these suggestions are helpful but hope so
Jan. 9, 2022
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Trying to get a better life |
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I left school when I was younger due to my mental illness. I left school What you wrote is correct but sounds a bit odd |
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And now, I am struggling to live my life like any normal person having a good job.
Once again your writing is clear but could perhaps flow better |
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This year, I've read some books about entrepreneurship and started to have some ideas about establishing businesses. This year, I've read some books about entrepreneurship and started to have some ideas about establishing a business |
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I'm going to apply what I've read on my first business in the hope that it thrives. I'm going to apply what I've read to |
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I believe in self-education so much! I strongly believe in self-education |
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