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773

Feb. 20, 2022

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Try try English.

I want to master English this time.

My friend lives in Hawaii.
He is over 70years old.

while he is well..
I want to speak English a lot with him.

I want to talk to him.

I am going to my best to master English.

thank you all for supoort.

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Try trI'm trying to improve my English.

I want to master English this time.

My friend lives in Hawaii.

He is over 70 years old.

I want to speak a lot of English a lot with him.

I want to talk to him.

I am going to try my best to master English.

tThank you all for your supoport.

Try trying English.

I want to master English this time.

My friend lives in Hawaii.

He is over 70 years old.

wWhile he is well..,

I want to speak a lot of English a lot with him.

Sounds more natural

I want to be able to talk to him.,

So I am going to try my best to master English.

tThank you all for the supoport.

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Good job! Remember to use capitals when starting a sentence.

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773

Feb. 21, 2022

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thanks for your advice.
Do my best !! :)

Try try English.

'I give English a try.' 'My English Attempt.'

He is over 70 years old.

wWhile he is well..

I want to speak English a lot with him.

I want to speak English with him while he is still healthy.

I am going to do my best to master English.

'to master the English language.'

tThank you all for your supoort.

'Thanks for your/the support!'

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Well done :)

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773

Feb. 21, 2022

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Thanks a lot :)
I got many hints!

Try try English.

I want to master English this time.

My friend lives in Hawaii.

He is over 70 years old.

wWhile he is well..,

I want to speak English a lot with him.

You can use "I want to speak a lot of English with him" instead.

I want to talk to him.

I am going to try my best to master English.

You need a verb.

tThank you all for your supoport.

"Support" needs a determiner, like "the" or "your."

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Great job!

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773

Feb. 21, 2022

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Thanks !!!
you gime me yell.

Try try English.

I want to master English this time.

My friend lives in Hawaii.

He is over 70 years old.

wWhile he is well..,

I want to speak a lot of English a lot with him.

I want to talk to him.

I am going to do my best to master English.

tThank you all for your supoport.

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773

Feb. 21, 2022

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I see :)
I got my misstake.
thanks so much!

Try try English.


Try try English.

Try try English.

Try try English.

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I want to master English this time.


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My friend lives in Hawaii.


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He is over 70years old.


He is over 70 years old.

He is over 70 years old.

He is over 70 years old.

He is over 70 years old.

He is over 70 years old.

while he is well..


wWhile he is well..,

wWhile he is well..,

wWhile he is well..

wWhile he is well..,

I want to speak English a lot with him.


I want to speak a lot of English a lot with him.

I want to speak English a lot with him.

You can use "I want to speak a lot of English with him" instead.

I want to speak English a lot with him.

I want to speak English with him while he is still healthy.

I want to speak a lot of English a lot with him.

Sounds more natural

I want to speak a lot of English a lot with him.

I want to talk to him.


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I want to be able to talk to him.,

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am going to my best to master English.


I am going to do my best to master English.

I am going to try my best to master English.

You need a verb.

I am going to do my best to master English.

'to master the English language.'

So I am going to try my best to master English.

I am going to try my best to master English.

thank you all for supoort.


tThank you all for your supoport.

tThank you all for your supoport.

"Support" needs a determiner, like "the" or "your."

tThank you all for your supoort.

'Thanks for your/the support!'

tThank you all for the supoport.

tThank you all for your supoport.

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