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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 30, 2023

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Trump's Hair

Have you noticed that former American President Trump's hair a little bit special, thick and blond for his age? Yesterday, I talked about it with my friends at mealtime. I am gonna share the interesting news here.

Trump's private doctor gave him an unreleased pill that relates to prostate, which could be positive for his hair. The interesting thing is, the doctor himself also use the same pill, so we can see that the doctor has a Trump hair look-alike. However, some people questioned this doctor's words in the news. Nevertheless, they have the same hairstyle and color is the truth. If this type of pill were to be sold in public, I'd like to try it if I am able to purchase it.

https://www.nytimes.com/2017/02/01/us/politics/trump-prostate-drug-hair-harold-bornstein.html

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Trump's Hair

Have you noticed that former American President Trump's hair a little bit special,is unusually thick and blond for his age?

Yesterday, I talked about it with my friends at mealtime.

I am gonna share the interesting news here.

Trump's private doctor gave him an unreleased pill that relates tofor prostate issues, which could binadvertently have positive outcomes for his hair.

Not quite sure what you mean by "unreleased". "Undisclosed"?

The interesting thing is, the doctor himself also uses the same pill, soand we can see that the doctor has a Trump hair look-alikesimilar Trump-like hair.

However, some people have questioned this doctor's words in the news.

Nevertheless, it is undisputed that they have the same hairstyle and hair color is the truth.

If this type of pill were to be sold in public, I'd like to try it if I am able to purchase it.

https://www.nytimes.com/2017/02/01/us/politics/trump-prostate-drug-hair-harold-bornstein.html

Trump's Hair

Have you noticed that former American President Trump's hair is a little bit unique? It's (especial,ly) thick and blond for his age?

Or "hair is a little bit thick and blond for his age?"

Yesterday, I talked about it with my friends at mealtime.

I am gonna'll share the interesting news here.

Or "I am going to". We hardly ever write out gonna, unless in super casual situations.

Trump's private doctor gave him an unreleased pill that relates to the prostate, which could behave a positive forimpact on his hair.

Or "which could also benefit his hair"

The interesting thing is, the doctor himself also uses the same pill, so we can see that the doctor has a Trump hair look-alikehair similar to Trump.

However, some people questioned this doctor's words in the news.

Nevertheless, it is true that they have the same hairstyle and color is the truth.

If this type of pill were to be sold into the public, I'd like to try it if I am able to purchase iout.

https://www.nytimes.com/2017/02/01/us/politics/trump-prostate-drug-hair-harold-bornstein.html

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Wow! I checked the article. His doctor has very nice hair haha

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 30, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! :-)

Trump's Hair


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Have you noticed that former American President Trump's hair a little bit special, thick and blond for his age?


Have you noticed that former American President Trump's hair is a little bit unique? It's (especial,ly) thick and blond for his age?

Or "hair is a little bit thick and blond for his age?"

Have you noticed that former American President Trump's hair a little bit special,is unusually thick and blond for his age?

Yesterday, I talked about it with my friends at mealtime.


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I am gonna share the interesting news here.


I am gonna'll share the interesting news here.

Or "I am going to". We hardly ever write out gonna, unless in super casual situations.

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Trump's private doctor gave him an unreleased pill that relates to prostate, which could be positive for his hair.


Trump's private doctor gave him an unreleased pill that relates to the prostate, which could behave a positive forimpact on his hair.

Or "which could also benefit his hair"

Trump's private doctor gave him an unreleased pill that relates tofor prostate issues, which could binadvertently have positive outcomes for his hair.

Not quite sure what you mean by "unreleased". "Undisclosed"?

The interesting thing is, the doctor himself also use the same pill, so we can see that the doctor has a Trump hair look-alike.


The interesting thing is, the doctor himself also uses the same pill, so we can see that the doctor has a Trump hair look-alikehair similar to Trump.

The interesting thing is, the doctor himself also uses the same pill, soand we can see that the doctor has a Trump hair look-alikesimilar Trump-like hair.

However, some people questioned this doctor's words in the news.


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However, some people have questioned this doctor's words in the news.

Nevertheless, they have the same hairstyle and color is the truth.


Nevertheless, it is true that they have the same hairstyle and color is the truth.

Nevertheless, it is undisputed that they have the same hairstyle and hair color is the truth.

If this type of pill were to be sold in public, I'd like to try it if I am able to purchase it.


If this type of pill were to be sold into the public, I'd like to try it if I am able to purchase iout.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

https://www.nytimes.com/2017/02/01/us/politics/trump-prostate-drug-hair-harold-bornstein.html


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