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kiwy

Dec. 29, 2021

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I have some trouble applying some offical files for studying abroad. It is much more difficult than I expected. So I feel a little irritated. However, since relevant things always get worse than I think it should be, my resolution is bocoming stronger and stronger. I want to live in a healthier society. I really really want to. Hence, when I want to lay down, all the shit stimulates me to work hard. I hope I can soon.

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Trouble

I'm haveing some trouble applysubmitting some official files for studying abroad.

Instead of "files" you can also say "documents".

It is much more difficult than I expected.

So, I feel a little irritated.

However, since relevimportant things are always get worseharder than I think ithey should be, myI resolution isve to boecominge stronger and stronger.

I'm not totally sure what you're trying to say here, so I made an assumption. Does this sound right?

I want to live in a healthier society.

I really, really want to.

HencTherefore, when I want to lay down, all the shit stimulmotivates me to work hard.

I hope I can soon.

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kiwy

Jan. 4, 2022

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However, since relevimportant things are always get worseharder than I think ithey should be, myI resolution isve to boecominge stronger and stronger.

I want to say that as the more difficult the things I need to do with all kinds of offices ( such as school and govenment) are, the more stronger of my determination is. Because I think such things should't be so hard in other developed countries.

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I have some trouble applying some offical files for studying abroad.


I'm haveing some trouble applysubmitting some official files for studying abroad.

Instead of "files" you can also say "documents".

It is much more difficult than I expected.


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So I feel a little irritated.


So, I feel a little irritated.

However, since relevant things always get worse than I think it should be, my resolution is bocoming stronger and stronger.


However, since relevimportant things are always get worseharder than I think ithey should be, myI resolution isve to boecominge stronger and stronger.

I'm not totally sure what you're trying to say here, so I made an assumption. Does this sound right?

I want to live in a healthier society.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I really really want to.


I really, really want to.

Hence, when I want to lay down, all the shit stimulates me to work hard.


HencTherefore, when I want to lay down, all the shit stimulmotivates me to work hard.

I hope I can soon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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