Jan. 28, 2022
Tropical depression
Last week, there was a tropical depression in my country. The weather was rainny for a whole week. Consequently, many areas were flooded.
The ministry of education declared that all schools an university are closed, until they publish a new note.
Many people are now homeless and was forced to leave their home because their house were filled with a lot of waters. And some people were evacuated because they live in area with high risk of landslide.
The misistry of the population opened about 40 sites to host the homeless people. A lot of NGO are donating for those people. It is actually sad to see that some people just lose all the things that they have in one night.
The flooded have multiples causes, one of the is the climate change. But the main cause remain illegal construction. The authorities are corrupted and they allow people to build anywhere, as long as they pay some amount of money. And now everyone has to pay with the consequences.
Tropical depression
The weather was rainny for a whole week.
Consequently, many areas were flooded.
The ministry of education declared that all schools and the university areshould closed, until they publish a new notemake a new announcement.
Many people are now homeless and wasere forced to leave their home because their house were filled with a lot of waters. ( or flooded)
And some people were evacuated because they live in area with a high risk of landslide.
The misnistry of the population opened about 40 sites to host the homeless people.
A lot of NGOs are donating forhelping thoese people.
It is actually sad to see that some people just lose all the things that they have in one night.
The floodeds have multiples causes, one of these is the climate change.
But the main cause remains illegal construction.
The authorities are corrupted and they allow people to build anywhere, as long as they pay some amount of money.
And now everyone has to pay with the consequences.
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Well done
Jan. 29, 2022
Thank you so much Romany !
Tropical depression
Last week, there was a tropical depression in my country.
The weather was rainny for a whole week.
Consequently, many areas were flooded.
The ministry of education declared that all schools and universityies are closed, until they publish a new noterelease an announcement.
Many people are now homeless and wasere forced to leave their homes because their houses were filled with a lot of waters.
"People" is plural so you need to use "were" instead of "was" to match the case
And some people were evacuated because they live in areas with a high risk of landslide.
The misnistry of the population opened about 40 sites to host the homeless people.
A lot of NGO are donating forto those people.
Donate to: I give the money to someone
Donate fore: I am making a donation on the behalf of someone else
It is actually sad to see that some people just lose all the things that they have in one night.
The floodeding haves multiples causes, one of the is thewhich is climate change.
But the main cause remains illegal construction.
The authorities are corrupted and they allow people to build anywhere, as long as they pay some amount of money.
And now everyone has to pay with the consequences.
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You did a good job writing this. There were some times when the subject and verb did not agree.
I hope the people affected by the flooding are okay.
Jan. 29, 2022
Thank you so much waywardwind for taking the time to correct my writing.
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A lot of NGO are donating for those people. A lot of NGO are donating Donate to: I give the money to someone Donate fore: I am making a donation on the behalf of someone else A lot of NGOs are |
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The flooded have multiples causes, one of the is the climate change. The flood The flood |
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But the main cause remain illegal construction. But the main cause remains illegal construction. But the main cause remains illegal construction. |
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The authorities are corrupted and they allow people to build anywhere, as long as they pay some amount of money. The authorities are corrupt The authorities are corrupt |
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And now everyone has to pay with the consequences. And now everyone has to pay And now everyone has to pay |
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