Aug. 7, 2025
Trip to Switzerland: 1st day, afternoon
It was around 1pm when I arrived in Interlake by train. It was cloudy and also rained occasionally. We, my wife and I, headed to a hotel we would stay that were located at nearby the station. When we arrived there, nothing looked special: The building was just slightly bigger than nearby houses and its outwards appearance was also bland. But the ambience of the inside of the building was wonderful. The room design seemed being kept same as the old time and there were many kinds of antiques such as furniture, clocks and lamps. Along the staircases, there were also some old arcade game machines hooked on the walls. The elevator was also very old: Its door was a manual door, not an automatic sliding door seen everywhere today.
After we put our luggage in our room, we went out and walked around the town. But within shorter than 30 minutes, we found ourselves in a restaurant because we had heavy rain (and were also hungry.) The restaurant was full of guests and vibrant. The service of staffs was quick and very nice. Among them, one staff was very talkative and friendly. Every few minutes he moved to a different table, talked to the guests and made them laugh. He also brought out an alphorn, a traditional Swiss wind instrument, from a room of the restaurant and played it. To be honest, I couldn't get how well he played it, but it was a pleasant experience and this would have not been experienced if we haven't decide to go to this restaurant, because we hadn't book any concerts of alphorns. After we had a dinner, we went back to the hotel and prepared for a hike scheduled on the second day.
It was around 1pm when I arrived in Interlake by train.
It was cloudy and also rained occasionally.
We, mMy wife and I, headed to a hotel we would stay that were located at nearby the station.
I think this is grammatically correct as is, but saying "We" or "My wife and I" are more natural.
When we arrived there, nothing looked special:. The building (?) was just slightly bigger than nearby houses and its outwards appearance was also bland.
Are you referring to a particular building?
But the ambience of the inside of the building was wonderful.
The room design seemed beingto be kept the same as the old time and there were many kinds of antiques, such as furniture, clocks, and lamps.
The comma between "clocks" and "and" is optional, but is the clearer way to write in my opinion.
After we put our luggage in our room, we went out and walked around the town.
But within shorter than 30 minutes, we found ourselves in a restaurant because we hadthere was heavy rain (and we were also hungry.)
Optional but more natural
The restaurant was full of guests and vibrant.
The service of the staffs was quick and very nice.
Among them, one staff member was very talkative and friendly.
Every few minutes he moved to a different table, talked to the guests and made them laugh.
He also brought out an alphorn, a traditional Swiss wind instrument, from a room of the restaurant and played it.
To be honest, I couldn't getunderstand how well he played it, but it was a pleasant experience, and this would have not been experienced if we havedn't decided to go to this restaurant, because we hadn't booked any concerts of alphorns.
After we had a dinner, we went back to the hotel and prepared for a hike scheduled on the second day.
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Great work! My comments are mostly optional or are very small. You have a great handle on the English language!
Aug. 9, 2025
Thank you for the feedback. In particular I am grateful for the corrections for articles and singular/plural forms of nouns. I am recently working on these, and your feedback was indeed very helpful!
Aug. 12, 2025
Thank you for the valuable corrections. Articles are one grammatical rule that always confuses me. Your comments figured out some points I didn't care or know so much. Thank you!
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Trip to Switzerland: 1st day, afternoon |
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It was around 1pm when I arrived in Interlake by train. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was cloudy and also rained occasionally. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We, my wife and I, headed to a hotel we would stay that were located at nearby the station.
I think this is grammatically correct as is, but saying "We" or "My wife and I" are more natural. |
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When we arrived there, nothing looked special: The building was just slightly bigger than nearby houses and its outwards appearance was also bland. When we arrived there, nothing looked special Are you referring to a particular building? |
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But the ambience of the inside of the building was wonderful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The room design seemed being kept same as the old time and there were many kinds of antiques such as furniture, clocks and lamps. The room design seemed The comma between "clocks" and "and" is optional, but is the clearer way to write in my opinion. |
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Along the staircases, there were also some old arcade game machines hooked on the walls. |
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The elevator was also very old: Its door was a manual door, not an automatic sliding door seen everywhere today. |
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After we put our luggage in our room, we went out and walked around the town. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But within shorter than 30 minutes, we found ourselves in a restaurant because we had heavy rain (and were also hungry.) But within shorter than 30 minutes, we found ourselves in a restaurant because Optional but more natural |
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The restaurant was full of guests and vibrant. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The service of staffs was quick and very nice. The service of the staff |
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Among them, one staff was very talkative and friendly. Among them, one staff member was very talkative and friendly. |
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Every few minutes he moved to a different table, talked to the guests and made them laugh. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He also brought out an alphorn, a traditional Swiss wind instrument, from a room of the restaurant and played it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To be honest, I couldn't get how well he played it, but it was a pleasant experience and this would have not been experienced if we haven't decide to go to this restaurant, because we hadn't book any concerts of alphorns. To be honest, I couldn't |
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After we had a dinner, we went back to the hotel and prepared for a hike scheduled on the second day. After we had |
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When we arrived at the hotel, nothing looked special: The building was just slightly bigger than nearby houses and its outwards appearance was also bland. |
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The restaurant was full of guests. |
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