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SummerTeaWater

June 24, 2021

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Trip to Museums in Warwaw

I went on a business trip to Warsaw 4 years ago.

Because it was my first trip to Europe, so I was very exited about it.

What's more, there are more than 40 museums in Warsaw.

I really like to visit museums during my trip, so Warsaw was the perfect place for me.

After I got off work, I visited one or two museums every day.

The war memorial museum was one of the best museums in Warsaw.

Many photos, goods and books about two World Wars were there.

I was really blown away by a real plane and a real tank.

I highly recommend to visit there, when you have an opportunity to visit Warsaw.

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BI was very excited because it was my first trip to Europe, so I was very exited about it.

Nothing hugely wrong with how you wrote it but it's generally considered bad to start a sentence with "because."

I really like to visit museums during my tripwhen I travel, so Warsaw was the perfect place for me.

I'm assuming you mean for both business trips and holidays so I changed trip to travel.

AEvery day after I got off work, I visited one or two museums every day.

MIt had many photos, goods and books aboutrelated to the two World Wars were there.

If you were just talking about books, about would be fine. But I changed it to related because you're also talking about photos and goods.

I was really blown away by a real plane and a real tanktank they had on display.

I highly recommend to visiting there, when you if you ever have an opportunity to visit Warsaw.

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plus500

June 24, 2021

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Hopefully we'll all be able to go on business trips again soon

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SummerTeaWater

June 24, 2021

402

Tyank you so much!

Trip to Museums in Warwaw


I went on a business trip to Warsaw 4 years ago.


Because it was my first trip to Europe, so I was very exited about it.


BI was very excited because it was my first trip to Europe, so I was very exited about it.

Nothing hugely wrong with how you wrote it but it's generally considered bad to start a sentence with "because."

What's more, there are more than 40 museums in Warsaw.


I really like to visit museums during my trip, so Warsaw was the perfect place for me.


I really like to visit museums during my tripwhen I travel, so Warsaw was the perfect place for me.

I'm assuming you mean for both business trips and holidays so I changed trip to travel.

After I got off work, I visited one or two museums every day.


AEvery day after I got off work, I visited one or two museums every day.

The war memorial museum was one of the best museums in Warsaw.


Many photos, goods and books about two World Wars were there.


MIt had many photos, goods and books aboutrelated to the two World Wars were there.

If you were just talking about books, about would be fine. But I changed it to related because you're also talking about photos and goods.

I was really blown away by a real plane and a real tank.


I was really blown away by a real plane and a real tanktank they had on display.

I highly recommend to visit there, when you have an opportunity to visit Warsaw.


I highly recommend to visiting there, when you if you ever have an opportunity to visit Warsaw.

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