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pancelot

Sept. 6, 2020

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My girlfriend comes to my house for holydays, and next monday we have to back to class, for this reason I have to take her to her house, she lives in other city, and the problem is that driving fear me too much and I don't know why, I have to drive by road and inside the city, the fact that I could crash into another car make feel panic.

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My girlfriend comes to my house for the holyidays, andbut next mMonday we have to back to class, f. For this reason, I have to take her to her house, shome. She lives in other city, and the problem is that driving fearscares me too much and I don't know why,. I will have to drive by road and inside the city, and the fact that I could crash into another car make feels me panic.

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Good job! :) I would recommend shorter sentences, though.

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johnnyclever

Sept. 6, 2020

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"She lives in other city" should be "She lives in another city".

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pancelot

April 1, 2021

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Thanks for your help, now I write shorter sentences haha

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My girlfriend comesis coming to my house for the holyidays, and next mMonday we have to go back to class, f. For this reason, I will have to take her to her house, s. She lives in another city, and the problem is that driving fearscares me too much and I don't know why,. I have to drive by road and inside the city, t. The fact that I could crash into another car makes me feel panic.

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You expressed your ideas well, just a few corrections here and there. Make sure to watch out for run-on sentences! Let me know if you have any questions.

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pancelot

April 1, 2021

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Thanks! I took your advice about sentences haha

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My girlfriend comes to my house for holydays, and next monday we have to back to class, for this reason I have to take her to her house, she lives in other city, and the problem is that driving fear me too much and I don't know why, I have to drive by road and inside the city, the fact that I could crash into another car make feel panic.

My girlfriend comesis coming to my house for the holyidays, and next mMonday we have to go back to class, f. For this reason, I will have to take her to her house, s. She lives in another city, and the problem is that driving fearscares me too much and I don't know why,. I have to drive by road and inside the city, t. The fact that I could crash into another car makes me feel panic.

My girlfriend comes to my house for the holyidays, andbut next mMonday we have to back to class, f. For this reason, I have to take her to her house, shome. She lives in other city, and the problem is that driving fearscares me too much and I don't know why,. I will have to drive by road and inside the city, and the fact that I could crash into another car make feels me panic.

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