Aug. 29, 2022
Trip
I went on a trip with an overnight stay for the first time in three years.
Planetarium tour, traveling alone.
I visited 4 facilities in 3 days, watched 6 planetarium projections, and participated in 2 events.
I was fun.
３年ぶりに宿泊を伴う旅行に行ってきました。
プラネタリウム巡りで一人旅です。
３日間で４施設に行き、６回のプラネタリウム投影を見て、２つのイベントに参加してきました。
楽しかったです。
Trip
I went on a trip with an overnight stay for the first time in three years.
PIt was a planetarium tour, traveling alone.
楽しそうです。
I visited 4 facilities in 3 days, watched 6 planetarium projections, and participated in 2 events.
It was fun.
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羨ましい！上手に書けています！
Sept. 2, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
Trip
I went on a trip with an overnight staytrip for the first time in three years.
Planetarium tour, traveling alone.
I visited 4 facilities in 3 days, watched 6 planetarium projections, and participated in 2 events.
It was fun. (or, I had fun)
Sept. 2, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
Trip
I went on a trip with an overnight stay for the first time in three years.
Planetarium tour, traveling alone.
The above works. But it reads like you are texting and you don't have a lot of time. I might recommend--"There was a planetarium tour and I traveled alone". Of course, if you were making the above a title or heading for the next sentence, then maybe style it as -- " Planetarium Tour & Traveling Along"
I was fun.
It was fun
Sept. 2, 2022
Thank you for your corrections and comments. They are very useful.
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