March 4, 2021
Trians
Ordinary trains, known as the slow trains are the common transportation for most of the last generation. They carry the dreams and homesickness of Chinese people. Inside trains, there are various food smells, mostly instant noodles, and sounds such as people talking, kids crying and laughing.
Over the long holiday, usually, there are not enough seats. Sometimes passengers have to stand or take a bench with them to the destination.
With the development of society, more and more passengers prefer high-speed trains though tickets are much more expensive. But they shorten the time and provides a comfortable environment for passengers. Still, ordinary trains fulfill their duties, sending every passenger to his destination. These precious memories forever stay in our hearts.
对于上一代人来说，火车是很普通的交通工具，也被称为慢速火车。火车承载着中国人人的理想和思念。火车内有各种事物味道，大多数是泡面的味道，还有说话声、孩子哭泣声和吵闹声。长假期间，通常，火车上位置不够多，有时乘客都一路站着或者带只小板凳坐。社会的发展中，越来越多的乘客更喜欢高铁，虽然车票更贵，但是省时，而且还提供了舒适的环境。但慢速火车仍然完成了它自己的使命，将每位乘客送达目的地。这些宝贵的建议将永远留在我们心里。
Triains
Ordinary trains, known as the slow trains, are the common transportation for most of the last generation.
They carry the dreams and homesickness of Chinese people.
Inside trains, there are various food smells, mostly that of instant noodles, and sounds, such as people talking, and kids crying and laughing.
More advanced words for “smell” are “scent” and “aroma”. They are usually used for good smells.
Over the long holiday, usually, there are usually not enough seats.
Sometimes passengers have to stand or take a bench with them to the destination.
With the development of society, more and more passengers prefer high-speed trains though tickets are much more expensive.
Butecause they shorten the time and provides a comfortable environment for passengers.
“Because” is used when you want to explain something, like why passengers prefer high-speed trains. (用來解釋前一句說的話)
“But” is used to show contrast, for example between the good and bad qualities of something. (用來作對比，例如好處和壞處之間的對比)
For example, “the train is fast (a good thing), but it is noisy (a bad thing).”
Still, ordinary trains fulfill their duties, sending every passenger to his destination.
These precious memories forever stay in our hearts.
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Your writing is really good! 做得好，加油！ 我也會說中文，不過寫作方面仍需努力 :)
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Ordinary trains, known as the slow trains are the common transportation for most of the last generation. Ordinary trains, known as Ordinary trains, known as |
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They carry the dreams and homesickness of Chinese people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Inside trains, there are various food smells, mostly instant noodles, and sounds such as people talking, kids crying and laughing. Inside trains, there are various food smells, mostly that of instant noodles, and sounds, such as people talking More advanced words for “smell” are “scent” and “aroma”. They are usually used for good smells. |
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Over the long holiday, usually, there are not enough seats. Over the long holiday, |
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Sometimes passengers have to stand or take a bench with them to the destination. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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With the development of society, more and more passengers prefer high-speed trains though tickets are much more expensive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But they shorten the time and provides a comfortable environment for passengers. But they shorten the time and provide B “Because” is used when you want to explain something, like why passengers prefer high-speed trains. (用來解釋前一句說的話) “But” is used to show contrast, for example between the good and bad qualities of something. (用來作對比，例如好處和壞處之間的對比) For example, “the train is fast (a good thing), but it is noisy (a bad thing).” |
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Still, ordinary trains fulfill their duties, sending every passenger to his destination. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These precious memories forever stay in our hearts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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