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What we talk about when we talk about wedding ceremony

One of my friends is getting marrying at the end of year, so now she worked very hard to make the wedding ceremony as perfect as possible although there is no such thing as perfect wedding ceremony. Things are always out of control.

just like my wedding ceremony.

My brother got married four years ago, and I was with him to do anything anyone asked me to do on the day of his wedding ceremony. I decided not to have wedding ceremony after I realized how a wedding ceremony could stressed my brother and his wife out.

Two years ago, I talked to my girlfriend blair about the idea of not having wedding ceremony. she agreed with me , and I had known that she would agree with me because she was with me on the day of my brother ceremony.

However, it was not just us "blair and I " who can make this decision in a chinese society. it had something to do with our family, so we need to get support from our parents.

For bliar, it is not a problem to get support from her parents. she was not close to her family due to some complicated family issue.  After she graduated from college she seldom went home as well as keeping in touch with them. Their  pattern of interaction is that they only mind their own business, respect the decision others made. So they wouldn't object about anything she already had decided.

For me, it is a biggest problem to talk my mom and dad into accepting my idea. I was very close to my family. My parents had a high responsibility for their children life. They always said to us that it was their duty to raise us, to support us to study until we graduate from college,and eventually hold our wedding ceremony. So far they had done a great job. My wedding ceremony was part of their plan for me, and they wouldn't accept my idea.

I remember the time when I went home with blair to tell them my idea. I sat with bilar on a couch across the table from my dad and my mom. I chatted about some ordinary thing to them at first, because I think if they were happy that would increase a little  chance of success. I brought this topic when I thought it was a good timing. I know now with hindsight there would never have been a good timing.

"we don't want to have wedding ceremony, we just want to register our marriage." I said.

As I expected, they couldn't accept the idea, it is like I was violating the rule that moral people should follow.

No matter how many strategies I tried to change their mind, they always had a reason to refuse me although all the reason sounded stupid to me.

After that, I even made my aunt help me persuade them,but it still failed.

They were stubborn like a rock.

So I was about to prepare our wedding ceremony with my girlfriend who was as reluctant as me at that time.

That was the first thing out of my control in the process of preparing the wedding ceremony.

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My wedding ceremony was part of their plan for me, and they wouldn't accept my idea.

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They were stubborn like a rock.

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My wedding ceremony was part of their plan for me, and they wouldn't accept my idea.

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What we talk about when we talk about wedding ceremony


What we talk about when we talk about a wedding ceremony What we talk about when we talk about a wedding ceremony

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One of my friends is getting marrying at the end of year, so now she worked very hard to make the wedding ceremony as perfect as possible although there is no such thing as perfect wedding ceremony.


One of my friends is getting marryingied at the end of year, so now she worked very hard to make the wedding ceremony as perfect as possible although there is no such thing as perfect wedding ceremony. One of my friends is getting married at the end of year, so now she worked very hard to make the wedding as perfect as possible although there is no such thing as perfect wedding.

One of my friends is getting marrying at the end of year, so now she worked veryshe has been working hard to make the wedding ceremony as perfect as possible although there is no such thing as the perfect wedding ceremony. One of my friends is getting marrying at the end of year, so she has been working hard to make the wedding ceremony as perfect as possible although there is no such thing as the perfect wedding ceremony.

"Worked very hard" indicates that she is no longer working hard on it, but since you say that she is getting married at the end of the year, this does not make sense.

Things are always out of control.


Things are always out of control, just like my wedding. Things are always out of control, just like my wedding.

Things areSomething is always out of control, just as they were during my wedding. Something is always out of control, just as they were during my wedding.

"Things": things overall "Something" makes it more specific and sounds more appropriate here, since you probably don't mean that absolutely nothing could be controlled.

just like my wedding ceremony.


just like my wedding ceremony.

just like my wedding ceremony.

My brother got married four years ago, and I was with him to do anything anyone asked me to do on the day of his wedding ceremony.


My brother got married four years ago, and I was with him to do anything anyone asked me to do on the day of his wedding ceremony. My brother got married four years ago, and I was with him to do anything anyone asked me to do on the day of his wedding.

My brother got married four years ago, and I was with him to do anything anyone asked me to do on the day of his wedding ceremonyon the day of his wedding ceremony to do anything that was asked of me. My brother got married four years ago, and I was with him on the day of his wedding ceremony to do anything that was asked of me.

"Anything anyone asked me to do" sounds a bit inelegant. Moving up the temporal adverbial phrase makes the meaning clearer.

I decided not to have wedding ceremony after I realized how a wedding ceremony could stressed my brother and his wife out.


I decided not to have wedding ceremony after I realized how a wedding ceremony couldit stressed my brother and his wife out. I decided not to have wedding ceremony after I realized how it stressed my brother and his wife out.

I decided not to have a wedding ceremony after I realized how having a wedding ceremony could stressed my brother and his wife out. I decided not to have a wedding ceremony after I realized how having a wedding ceremony stressed my brother and his wife out.

Two years ago, I talked to my girlfriend blair about the idea of not having wedding ceremony.


Two years ago, I talked to my girlfriend bBlair about the idea of not having wedding ceremony. Two years ago, I talked to my girlfriend Blair about the idea of not having wedding ceremony.

Two years ago, I talked to my girlfriend bBlair about the idea of not having a wedding ceremony. Two years ago, I talked to my girlfriend Blair about the idea of not having a wedding ceremony.

she agreed with me , and I had known that she would agree with me because she was with me on the day of my brother ceremony.


sShe agreed with me , and I had known that she would agree with me because she was with me on the day of my brother's ceremony. She agreed with me, and I had known that she would agree with me because she was with me on the day of my brother's ceremony.

sShe agreed with me , and I had known that she would agree with me because she was with me on the day of my brother's ceremony. She agreed with me, and I had known that she would agree with me because she was with me on the day of my brother's ceremony.

However, it was not just us "blair and I " who can make this decision in a chinese society.


However, it was not just us "bBlair and I " who can make this decision in a cChinese society. However, it was not just us "Blair and I " who can make this decision in a Chinese society.

However, it wais not just us "bBlair and I " who can make this decision in a cChinese society. However, it is not just us "Blair and I" who can make this decision in a Chinese society.

it had something to do with our family, so we need to get support from our parents.


it had something to do withconcerns our family, so we need to get support from our parents. it concerns our family, so we need to get support from our parents.

iIt had something to do withconcerns our family, so we need to get support from our parents. It concerns our family, so we need to get support from our parents.

For bliar, it is not a problem to get support from her parents.


For bliaBlair, it is not a problem to get support from her parents. For Blair, it is not a problem to get support from her parents.

For bliaBlair, it is not a problem to get support from her parents. For Blair, it is not a problem to get support from her parents.

she was not close to her family due to some complicated family issue.


sShe wais not close to her family due to somea complicated family issue. She is not close to her family due to a complicated family issue.

sShe wais not close to her family due to some complicated family issue. She is not close to her family due to some complicated family issue.

"Is" is better because this is clearly a situation that persists into the present.

After she graduated from college she seldom went home as well as keeping in touch with them.


After she graduated from college she seldom went home as well as not keeping in touch with them. After she graduated from college she seldom went home as well as not keeping in touch with them.

After she graduated from college, she seldom went home as well asor keepingt in touch with them. After she graduated from college, she seldom went home or kept in touch with them.

Their  pattern of interaction is that they only mind their own business, respect the decision others made.


Their  pattern of interaction is that they only mind their own business, and respect the decisions others madke. Their pattern of interaction is that they mind their own business and respect the decisions others make.

Their  pattern of interaction is that they only mind their own business, and respect the decisions others madke. Their pattern of interaction is that they mind their own business and respect the decisions others make.

So they wouldn't object about anything she already had decided.


So they wouldn't object about anything she has already had decided. So they wouldn't object about anything she has already decided.

So they wouldn't object abouto anything she has already had decided. So they wouldn't object to anything she has already decided.

For me, it is a biggest problem to talk my mom and dad into accepting my idea.


For me, it iwas a biggest problem to talk my mom and dad into accepting my idea. For me, it was a big problem to talk my mom and dad into accepting my idea.

For me, it is a biggest problemwas difficult to talk my mom and dad into accepting my idea. For me, it was difficult to talk my mom and dad into accepting my idea.

I was very close to my family.


I wasam very close to my family. I am very close to my family.

I wasam very close to my family. I am very close to my family.

My parents had a high responsibility for their children life.


My parents hadve a high responsibility for their children's life. My parents have a high responsibility for their children's life.

My parents hadve borne a high responsibility for their children's lifeves. My parents have borne a high responsibility for their children's lives.

They always said to us that it was their duty to raise us, to support us to study until we graduate from college,and eventually hold our wedding ceremony.


They always said to us that it was their duty to raise us, to support us to study until we graduate from college, and eventually hold our wedding ceremony. They always said to us that it was their duty to raise us, to support us to study until we graduate from college, and eventually hold our wedding ceremony.

They always said to us that it was their duty to raise us, to support us to study until we graduated from college, and to eventually hold our wedding ceremony. They always said to us that it was their duty to raise us, to support us to study until we graduated from college, and to eventually hold our wedding ceremony.

"To" is part of the parallel structure because you included it in "to support us," so it can't be omitted in the last part.

So far they had done a great job.


So far they hadve done a great job. So far they have done a great job.

Imperfect: action has been completed and describes the past Present prefect: action describes a present state and may still be ongoing.

My wedding ceremony was part of their plan for me, and they wouldn't accept my idea.


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I remember the time when I went home with blair to tell them my idea.


I remember the time when I went home with bBlair to tell them my idea. I remember the time when I went home with Blair to tell them my idea.

I remember the time when I went home with bBlair to tell them about my idea. I remember the time when I went home with Blair to tell them about my idea.

I sat with bilar on a couch across the table from my dad and my mom.


I sat with biBlair on a couch across the table from my dad and my mom. I sat with Blair on a couch across the table from my dad and my mom.

I sat with biBlair on a couch across the table from my dad and my mom. I sat with Blair on a couch across the table from my dad and my mom.

I chatted about some ordinary thing to them at first, because I think if they were happy that would increase a little  chance of success.


I chatted about some ordinary thing to them at first, because I thinkought if they were happy that would increase a little  our chance of success a little. I chatted about some ordinary thing to them at first, because I thought if they were happy that would increase our chance of success a little.

I chatted about some ordinary thing to them at first, because I thinkought if they were happy , that would increase a littlthe  chance of success a little. I chatted about some ordinary thing to them at first, because I thought if they were happy, that would increase the chance of success a little.

I brought this topic when I thought it was a good timing.


I brought thisup the topic when I thought ithe timing was a good timing. I brought up the topic when I thought the timing was good.

I brought this topic up when I thought it was a good timinge. I brought this topic up when I thought it was a good time.

I know now with hindsight there would never have been a good timing.


I know know with hindsight there would never have been a good timinge. I know know with hindsight there would never have been a good time.

I know now with hindsight there would never have been a good timinge. I know now with hindsight there would never have been a good time.

"we don't want to have wedding ceremony, we just want to register our marriage."


"wWe don't want to have a wedding ceremlebrationy, we just want to register our marriage." "We don't want to have a wedding celebration, we just want to register our marriage."

"wWe don't want to have wedding ceremony,; we just want to register our marriage.," "We don't want to have wedding ceremony; we just want to register our marriage,"

The period is replaced with a comma if the end of the quotation is not the end of the bigger syntactical structure to which it belongs: - "It's raining," I said. "We should go out tomorrow instead." - She said, "I left because I waited for three hours without anyone appearing."

I said.


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As I expected, they couldn't accept the idea, it is like I was violating the rule that moral people should follow.


As I expected, they couldn't accept the idea, it is like I was violating thea rule that moral people should follow. As I expected, they couldn't accept the idea, it is like I was violating a rule that moral people should follow.

As I expected, they couldn't accept the idea, it i. It was like I was violating thea rule that moral people should follow. As I expected, they couldn't accept the idea. It was like I was violating a rule that moral people should follow.

Be careful of comma splices. In certain situations, omitting the conjunction can work, but this is not one of them.

No matter how many strategies I tried to change their mind, they always had a reason to refuse me although all the reason sounded stupid to me.


No matter how many strategies I tried to change their mind, they always had a reason to refuse me although all the reasons sounded stupid to me. No matter how many strategies I tried to change their mind, they always had a reason to refuse me although all the reasons sounded stupid to me.

No matter how many strategies I triedused to try to change their mind, they always had a reason to refuse me although all the reasons sounded stupid to me. No matter how many strategies I used to try to change their mind, they always had a reason to refuse me although all the reasons sounded stupid to me.

After that, I even made my aunt help me persuade them,but it still failed.


After that, I even made my aunt help me persuade them, but it still failed. After that, I even made my aunt help me persuade them, but it still failed.

They were stubborn like a rock.


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So I was about to prepare our wedding ceremony with my girlfriend who was as reluctant as me at that time.


So I was abouthad to prepare our wedding ceremony with my girlfriend, who was as reluctant as me at that time. So I had to prepare our wedding with my girlfriend, who was as reluctant as me at that time.

So I was abouthad to prepare our wedding ceremony with my girlfriend, who was as reluctant as meI was at that time. So I had to prepare our wedding ceremony with my girlfriend, who was as reluctant as I was at that time.

That was the first thing out of my control in the process of preparing the wedding ceremony.


That was the first thing out of my control in the process of preparing the wedding ceremony. That was the first thing out of my control in the process of preparing the wedding.

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