Aug. 3, 2025
One hot summer day, after finishing a solid morning of work, I stopped by the supermarket on my way home from the library, with my backpack full of books. I wanted to treat myself—maybe a dessert, something like a Häagen-Dazs ice cream.
I wandered through the shelves and freezer cases, but thoughts kept popping up: “I already have yogurt at home,” or “That’s way too many calories.” In the end, I picked up a small pack of juicy-looking plums—firm, fresh, and in season.
It turns out that what I really want as a treat is something natural, seasonal, and nourishing. Something that won’t make me feel guilty afterward.
Ever since I read Atomic Habits by James Clear, I find it hard to buy snacks on a whim. I want to stay healthy. I’ve worked hard to lose weight and lower my body fat, and I want to keep it that way.
In the end, the best reward might just be the feeling that I’m proud of the choices I’ve made—and of who I am right now.
ある暑い日、午前中しっかり仕事して、午後は少しゆっくり過ごそうと思って、図書館で本を借りた帰り、自転車でスーパーに寄った。何か自分に特別なものを買おうと思った。デザートとか、アイスとか。いくつかの棚やケースをのぞいてみたけど、家に似たようなヨーグルトがあるなとか、カロリーが高いなとか考えてしまった。それで、結局おいしそうな小さいプラムを買って帰ってきた。この季節しか買えない、栄養のあるナチュラルなもの。そういうものを私は買いたいと思っているみたい。
ジェームズ・クリアーの『複利で伸びる1つの習慣』を読んでからというもの、気楽にお菓子を買えなくなった。私は健康でいたいし、せっかく落ちた体重、低くなった体脂肪をキープしたい。今の自分っていいな、と思えることが一番のご褒美なんだよね。
Treats are tricky ご褒美は難しい
One a hot summer day, after finishing a solid morning of work, I stopped by the supermarket on my way home from the library, with my backpack full of books.
I wanted to treat myself—maybe a dessert, something like a Häagen-Dazs ice cream.
I wandered through the shelves and freezer cases, but thoughts kept popping up such as: “I already have yogurt at home,” or “That’s way too many calories.” In theSo I end, Ied pickeding up a small pack of juicy-looking plums—firm, fresh, and in season.
Your original phrase makes sense and can be used. This is just my minor suggestion to create a smoother transition!
It turns out that what I really wanted as a treat is something natural, seasonal, and nourishing.
Something that won’t make me feel guilty afterwards.
Ever since I read Atomic Habits by James Clear, I find it hard to buy snacks on a whim.
I want to stay healthy.
I’ve worked hard to lose weight and lower my body fat, and I want to keep it that way.
You can also say, "reduce" instead if lower and also, "I want to maintain it that way" also works! It has the same nuance.
In the end, the best reward might just be the feeling that I’m proud of the choices I’ve made—and of who I am right now.
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Good job!
It's definitely hard to find balance with diet sometimes when there's so many good things we can choose from. 気持ち分かりますよ。
Treats are tricky ご褒美は難しい
One hot summer day, after finishing a solid morning of work, I stopped by the supermarket on my way home from the library, with my backpack full of books.
I wanted to treat myself—maybe a dessert, something like a(a pint of/cup of/scoop of) Häagen-Dazs ice cream.
For this sentence, you can word the latter half either like:
"something like a cup of/pint of/scoop of Häagen-Dazs ice cream"
or
"something like Häagen-Dazs ice cream"
If you use "a" before "Häagen-Dazs", you must add the amount or measurement of the ice cream. It may be simpler to just say "something like Häagen-Dazs ice cream" and remove the "a" altogether.
I wandered through the shelves and freezer cases, but thoughts kept popping up: “I already have yogurt at home,” or “That’s way too many calories.” In the end, I picked up a small pack of juicy-looking plums—firm, fresh, and in season.
It turns out that what I really want as a treat is something natural, seasonal, and nourishing.
Something that won’t make me feel guilty afterward.
Ever since I read Atomic Habits by James Clear, I find it hard to buy snacks on a whim.
I want to stay healthy.
I’ve worked hard to lose weight and lower my body fat, and I want to keep it that way.
In the end, the best reward might just be the feeling that I’m proud of the choices I’ve made—and of who I am right now.
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Well done!! When I feel tempted to eat a late night snack, I always tell myself: "It'll make the me of tomorrow happy if I don't eat a snack now" or "I'll never regret skipping a late night snack". Haha!
Treats are tricky ご褒美は難しい
One hot summer day, after finishing a solid morning of work, I stopped by the supermarket on my way home from the library, with my backpack full of books.
I wanted to treat myself—maybe a dessert, something like a Häagen-Dazs ice cream.
I wandered through the shelves and freezer cases, but thoughts kept popping up: “I already have yogurt at home,” or “That’s way too many calories.” In the end, I picked up a small pack of juicy-looking plums—firm, fresh, and in season.
It turns out that what I really want as a treat is something natural, seasonal, and nourishing.
Something that won’t make me feel guilty afterward.
Ever since I read Atomic Habits by James Clear, I find it hard to buy snacks on a whim.
I want to stay healthy.
I’ve worked hard to lose weight and lower my body fat, and I want to keep it that way.
What you've written is absolutely fine, but I think it's a smidge more natural to just say "lose weight" or "lose weight and lean down".
People tend to speak about lowering their body fat percentage in the more technical sense of bulking and cutting, and then I think it's almost always by saying "body fat percentage" and not just "body fat" as a quantity.
In the end, the best reward might just be the feeling that I’m proud of the choices I’ve made—and of who I am right now.
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You write very naturally!
When I read your title, I thought of the phrase "trick or treat", like on Halloween. Did you do that on purpose? If you did, that's really impressive. (°ー°〃)
I wandered through the shelves and freezer cases, but thoughts kept popping up:, like “I already have yogurt at home,” or “That’s way too many calories.” In the end, I picked up a small pack of juicy-looking plums—firm, fresh, and in season.
Whenever you use a colon [:], you usually list whatever comes after it using a semicolon [;]. I personally use these things if I have three or more things to list with a given topic, so maybe you could try testing that in a future entry.
Something that won’t make me feel guilty afterwards.
I've found "afterwards" in books and things like that more often than "afterward," but honestly, either can work.
Ever since I read "Atomic Habits" by James Clear, I find it hard to buy snacks on a whim.
If you can, italicize book titles. Otherwise, add quotation marks around them to note who created what.
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I agree with everything you've written here! Plums and other fruits are really good desserts, and I'm doing my best to manage my weight, too. Let's do our best together!
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