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Travelling abroad helps to understand your own country

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Nowadays many people travel all over the world. Many of them say that travelling helps them to understand their own country better. At that time others people believe that understanding of your own country doesn`t require travelling abroad; on the contrary, it may impede to person love and appreciate his own country.
In my opinion, comprising of two things always helps to understand better every of them. So, if a person go abroad, firstly he can see differencies between his own country and another country. For example, something the person took for granted in his own country may be absent in another country, and this fact may provoke thinking about reasons in history and culture of his homeland. Second, talking about foreing culture with habitants of foreing country may make one ponder what he could tell about his one.
At the same time some people believe that a person can learn more about his own country without traveling abroad. On the contrary, travelling will distract him from the motherland. Because one must visit all regions of his country before he going somewhere else.
I am not agree with this opinion for particular reason: nobody can learn something quite deeply without comparison with different versions.
To sum up, I would like to say that it is impossible to enrich one's knowing about his country without traveling abroad. It is the most effective way to get that knowledge.

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Travelling abroad helps to understand your own country

Training essay

Nowadays many people travel all over the world.

Many of them say that travelling helps them to understand their own country better.

At thate same time, others people believe that an understanding of your own country doesn`'t require travelling abroad; on the contrary, it may impede toa person's ability to love and appreciate his own country.

In my opinion, comprising of two things always helps to understand better everyeach of them better.

Not sure that "comprising" is the word you are looking for here. This sentence needs to be reformulated to be understood

So, if a person goes abroad, firstly he can see differencies between his own country and another country.

For example, something the person took for granted in his own country may be absent in another country, and this fact may provoke thinking about the reasons ing behind the history and culture of his homeland.

Second, talking about foreingn cultures with habitants of foreingn countryies may make one ponder what he could tellexplain about his onwn culture.

At the same time some people believe that a person can learn more about his own country without traveling abroad.

On the contrary, travelling will distract him from the motherland.

BThis is because one must visit all regions of his country before he goinges somewhere else.

In formal/written English, we don't normally start sentences with "because", because the sentence will often be a fragment. To express the complete idea, it is better to say "this is because"

I amdo not agree with this opinion for one particular reason: nobody can learn something quite as deeply without comparison withng it to different versions.

To sum up, I would like to say that it is impossible to enrich one's knowingledge about histheir country without traveling abroad.

It is the most effective way to get that knowledge.

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Try to stay consistent in your use of one/they or he as the individual in this subject. Overall, good work!

It is the most effective way to get that knowledge.


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Travelling abroad helps to understand your ouw country


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Nowadays many people travel all over the world.


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Many of them say that travelling helps them to understand their own country better.


Many of them say that travelling helps them to understand their own country better.

At that time others people believe that understanding of your own country doesn`t require travelling abroad; on the contrary, it may impede to person love and appreciate his own country.


At thate same time, others people believe that an understanding of your own country doesn`'t require travelling abroad; on the contrary, it may impede toa person's ability to love and appreciate his own country.

In my opinion, comprising of two things always helps to understand better every of them.


In my opinion, comprising of two things always helps to understand better everyeach of them better.

Not sure that "comprising" is the word you are looking for here. This sentence needs to be reformulated to be understood

So, if a person go abroad, firstly he can see differencies between his own country and another country.


So, if a person goes abroad, firstly he can see differencies between his own country and another country.

For example, something the person took for granted in his own country may be absent in another country, and this fact may provoke thinking about reasons in history and culture of his homeland.


For example, something the person took for granted in his own country may be absent in another country, and this fact may provoke thinking about the reasons ing behind the history and culture of his homeland.

Second, talking about foreing culture with habitants of foreing country may make one ponder what he could tell about his one.


Second, talking about foreingn cultures with habitants of foreingn countryies may make one ponder what he could tellexplain about his onwn culture.

At the same time some people believe that a person can learn more about his own country without traveling abroad.


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On the contrary, travelling will distract him from the motherland.


On the contrary, travelling will distract him from the motherland.

Because one must visit all regions of his country before he going somewhere else.


BThis is because one must visit all regions of his country before he goinges somewhere else.

In formal/written English, we don't normally start sentences with "because", because the sentence will often be a fragment. To express the complete idea, it is better to say "this is because"

I am not agree with this opinion for particular reason: nobody can learn something quite deeply without comparison with different versions.


I amdo not agree with this opinion for one particular reason: nobody can learn something quite as deeply without comparison withng it to different versions.

To sum up, I would like to say that it is impossible to enrich one's knowing about his country without traveling abroad.


To sum up, I would like to say that it is impossible to enrich one's knowingledge about histheir country without traveling abroad.

Travelling abroad helps to understand your own country


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