April 23, 2022
Traveling With My Parents
Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang where is a nice place in Korea.
About 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories.
When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before.
We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.
I hope all of my family members get good memories here.
Traveling With My Parents
Today, my family and my parentsI traveled to Danyang whereich is a really nice place in Korea.
About 20 years ago, we visited here andWe had visited here about 20 years ago as well, therefore I hadve a lot of good memories.¶
When I came here again, I could findame across places whereich I had visited before.
We hadtried a variety of tasty foods and we also visited nice tourist attractions.
I hope all of my family members getmade good/great memories here.
April 24, 2022
Thank you so much.
Today, my family and my parentsI travelled to Danyang, whereich is a nicebeautiful place in Korea.
Your parents are your family
Its better to use another describing word other than 'nice'
About 20 years ago, we visited here and I had, so I've got a lot of good memories.
I had a lot of good memories means you had the memories, but you don't have or remember them anymore. When in fact you do
When I came here againreturned here, I cfould find places whereich I had previously visited before.
Sounds better, is more grammatically correct
We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.
I hope all of my family members gehave now got good memories here.
They are not creating the memories now, you want them to now have the good memories
April 24, 2022
Thank you!
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Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang where is a nice place in Korea. Today, my family and Your parents are your family Its better to use another describing word other than 'nice' Today, my family and |
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About 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories. About 20 years ago, we visited here I had a lot of good memories means you had the memories, but you don't have or remember them anymore. When in fact you do
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When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before. When I Sounds better, is more grammatically correct When I came here again, I c |
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We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! We |
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I hope all of my family members get good memories here. I hope all of my family members They are not creating the memories now, you want them to now have the good memories I hope all of my family members |
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