Sept. 27, 2021
Traveling Overseas
I do a lot of things when I travel overseas.
First, I like to move around and visit a lot of site seeing.
I often go tourist attractions where many people visit.
I take tons of pictures where I look around there.
Next, I like to go to local museums where I can get lots of information like history, geography, trend and so on.
With the information, I understand more about the city and select the next plan.
I also buy some souvenirs at the museum, which help me remind good memories there.
Plus, I try to visit a post office to send a mail to me.
I write my feeling during travel and send it to my home.
It takes one or two weeks to receive the mail.
Most of the case, the feeling of the trip is fading away, so the mail is very good to remember the feeling.
So, these are the things I do when I take trips overseas.
Traveling Overseas
I do a lot of things when I travel overseas.
First, I like to move around and visit a lot of site seeings.
I often go to tourist attractions wherethat many people visit.
I take tons of pictures wheren I look around there.
Next, I like to go to local museums, where I can get lots of information on subjects like history, geography, trend and so on.
With theat information, I understand more about the city and select the next plancan plan what I want to do next.
I also buy some souvenirs at the museum, which help me remind me of the good memories I had there.
Plus, I try to visit a post office to send a mail back to me.
I write how I'my feeling duringwhile traveling and send it to my home.
It takes one or two weeks to receive the mail.
Most of theIn most cases, the feelings I had ofn the trip ishave already started to fadinge away, so the mail is a very good to remember threminder of those feelings.
So, these are the things I do when I take trips overseas.
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Sept. 28, 2021
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Traveling Overseas This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I do a lot of things when I travel overseas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First, I like to move around and visit a lot of site seeing. First, I like to move around and visit a lot of site |
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I often go tourist attractions where many people visit. I often go to tourist attractions |
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I take tons of picture where I look around there. |
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Next, I like to go to local museums where I can get lots of information like history, geography, trend and so on. Next, I like to go to local museums, where I can get lots of information on subjects like history, geography, |
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With the information, I understand more about the city and select the next plan. With th |
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I also buy some souvenirs at the museum which help me remind good memories there. |
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Plus, I try to visit a post office to send a mail to me. Plus, I try to visit a post office to send |
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I write my feeling during travel and send it to my home. I write how I'm |
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It takes one or two weeks to receive the mail. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most of the case, the feeling of the trip is fading away, so the mail is very good to remind the feeling. |
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So, these are the things I do when I take trips overseas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I take tons of pictures where I look around there. I take tons of pictures whe |
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I also buy some souvenirs at the museum, which help me remind good memories there. I also buy some souvenirs at the museum, which help |
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Most of the case, the feeling of the trip is fading away, so the mail is very good to remember the feeling.
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