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mackie500

March 15, 2023

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I love the ideia of meet the whole world but at the same time I do not really wanna know the whole world because there is some countries that are very hard to travel safelly. I completly understand that somethings are just cultural stuff and it is the humanity way of exist. So because this I wanna more travel around Euroupe and some part of the America , and also in my own country because the Brazil is incredible.

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Traveling

I love the ideia of meettraveling the whole world but at the same time I do not really wanna know the whole worldt to because there isare some countries that are very hard to travel in safelly.

I completely understand that some things are just cultural stuff and it is the humanitypeople's way of existing.

So because of this, I wanna moret to travel more around Euroupe and some parts of the America , ands but also in my own country because the Brazil is incredible.

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Nicely written and good luck to you!

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mackie500

March 15, 2023

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Thank you!

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I love the ideia of meeting the whole world, but at the same time I do not really wannat to know the whole world because there isare some countries that are very hard to travel in safelly.

I completely understand that some things are just cultural stuffdifferences and it is the humanityir way of existing.

So because of this I wanna moret to travel more around Euroupe and some parts of the America , and also in my own country, because the Brazil is incredible.

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Very good! I would like to see the world too, but I still haven't seen much of my own country.

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mackie500

March 15, 2023

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Me too!

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I love the ideia of meet the whole world but at the same time I do not really wanna know the whole world because there is some countries that are very hard to travel safelly.

I love the ideia of meeting the whole world, but at the same time I do not really wannat to know the whole world because there isare some countries that are very hard to travel in safelly.

I love the ideia of meettraveling the whole world but at the same time I do not really wanna know the whole worldt to because there isare some countries that are very hard to travel in safelly.

I completly understand that somethings are just cultural stuff and it is the humanity way of exist.

I completely understand that some things are just cultural stuffdifferences and it is the humanityir way of existing.

I completely understand that some things are just cultural stuff and it is the humanitypeople's way of existing.

So because this I wanna more travel around Euroupe and some part of the America , and also in my own country because the Brazil is incredible.

So because of this I wanna moret to travel more around Euroupe and some parts of the America , and also in my own country, because the Brazil is incredible.

So because of this, I wanna moret to travel more around Euroupe and some parts of the America , ands but also in my own country because the Brazil is incredible.

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