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Nov. 17, 2022

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To me, it is one of the many pleasures of traveling to look out of a train window. I enjoy seeing a beautiful nature landscape. Hoever, it is also enjoyable to see countryside and towns. All of people, whom I see and am unlikely to meet in the future, are living daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows. When I think that, I feel as if my worries are trivial and I feel relaxed.

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Traveling

To me, it is one of the many pleasures of traveling to look out of a train window.

I enjoy seeing a beautiful nature landscape of nature.

Hoever, iIt is also enjoyable to see countryside and towns, however, to see towns and the countryside.

All of pPeople, all of whom I see and am unlikely to meet in the future, are living dailytheir lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

When I think of that, I feel as if my worries are trivial and I feel relaxed.

To me, it is one of the many pleasures of traveling is to look out of a train window.

I enjoy seeing athe beautiful natureal landscape.

Hohowever, it is also enjoyable to see the countryside and towns.

All of these people, whom I see and am unlikely to meet in the future, are livingthey are all living out their daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

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Great exposition here, it was very evocative for me. This felt similar to some dialogs in Japanese stories I've read, dialogs where a wise and experienced character is expounding upon the audience, their philosophical perspective.

To me, it is one of the many pleasures of traveling is to look out of a train window.

I enjoy seeing a beautiful nature landscapes.

However, it is also enjoyable as well to see the countryside and towns.

All ofthe people, whomthat I see and am unlikely toprobably won't meet in the future, are living daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

When I think about that, I feel as ifthat my worries are trivial and I feel relaxedgrateful.

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good text , portrays emotions , keep it up

Travelling

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To me, it is one of the many pleasures of travelling is to look out of a train window.

I enjoy seeing a beautiful natureal landscape.

Beautiful nature landscape is also correct.

However, it is also enjoyable to see the countryside and towns.

All ofthe people, whom I see andbut am unlikely to meet in the future, are living daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

However, it is also enjoyable to see countryside and towns.

All ofthe people, whom I see and am unlikely to meet in the future, are living their daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

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Nice piece of writing :)

I enjoy seeing a beautiful nature landscape.


I enjoy seeing a beautiful natureal landscape.

Beautiful nature landscape is also correct.

I enjoy seeing a beautiful nature landscapes.

I enjoy seeing athe beautiful natureal landscape.

I enjoy seeing a beautiful nature landscape of nature.

Hoever, it is also enjoyable to see countryside and towns.


However, it is also enjoyable to see countryside and towns.

However, it is also enjoyable to see the countryside and towns.

However, it is also enjoyable as well to see the countryside and towns.

Hohowever, it is also enjoyable to see the countryside and towns.

Hoever, iIt is also enjoyable to see countryside and towns, however, to see towns and the countryside.

Traveling


Travelling

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To me, it is one of the many pleasures of traveling to look out of a train window.


To me, it is one of the many pleasures of travelling is to look out of a train window.

To me, it is one of the many pleasures of traveling is to look out of a train window.

To me, it is one of the many pleasures of traveling is to look out of a train window.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

All of people, whom I see and am unlikely to meet in the future, are living daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows.


All ofthe people, whom I see and am unlikely to meet in the future, are living their daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

All ofthe people, whom I see andbut am unlikely to meet in the future, are living daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

All ofthe people, whomthat I see and am unlikely toprobably won't meet in the future, are living daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

All of these people, whom I see and am unlikely to meet in the future, are livingthey are all living out their daily lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

All of pPeople, all of whom I see and am unlikely to meet in the future, are living dailytheir lives with their own happiness and sorrows.

When I think that, I feel as if my worries are trivial and I feel relaxed.


When I think about that, I feel as ifthat my worries are trivial and I feel relaxedgrateful.

When I think of that, I feel as if my worries are trivial and I feel relaxed.

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