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For comfort I would choose to live in France. I love the little French towns, their people and their food. Italy would be a good candidate too. I enjoyed a lot in Rome in a holidays some years ago, with its pizzes and history. With the visit to the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; It was like to enter in the ancient Rome, stepping the same sand that the gladiators. However, I also would like to go to Japan, because is a country very different from mine, but at same time, I know a little. We have a wonderful planet to discover.

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For comfort, I would choose to live in France.

I love the little French towns, their people and their food.

I enjoyed Rome a lot in Rome in aduring holidays some years ago, with its pizzesas' and history.

With the visit to the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; It was like to enter in theing into ancient Rome, stepping on the same sand thatas the gladiators.

However, I alsoIn addition, I would also like to go to Japan, because it is a country very different from mine, but at same time, I know a little about it.

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Ducky

July 8, 2022

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Thanks.

For comfort I would choose to live in France because I am most comfortable there.

I love the little French townstowns there, their people and their food.

Italy would also be a good candidate too.

I really enjoyed a lot in Rome in a holidaysmy holidays/vacation in Rome some years ago, along with its pizzeas and history.

With theI had a strangle feeling when I visit toed the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; Iit was like to enter in theg ancient Rome, stepping. I was walking on the same sand that the gladiators did.

However, I also would like to go to Japan, because is a countryt is very different from miney country, but at the same time, I know a little about it.

We have a wonderful planet to discover.

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Ducky

July 8, 2022

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Thanks.

For comfort, I would choose to live in France.

I love the little French towns, their people, and their food.

For French towns in general, 'the' is not necessary. E.g:
I love all French towns with old churches!
Which of the French towns on this map do you want to see?

Italy would be a good candidate too.

I enjoyed a lotbeing in Rome ia lot on a holidays some years ago, with its pizzeas and history.

With theDuring my visit to the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; It was like to enter in theg ancient Rome, stepping on the same sand that the gladiators did.

However, I also would like to go to Japan, because it is a country very different from mine, but at same time, I know a little.

We have a wonderful planet to discover.

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Nice work :)

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Ducky

July 8, 2022

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Thanks a lot.

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For comfort, I would choose to live in France.

I love the little French towns, their people and their food.

Italy would be a good candidate too.

I really enjoyed a lot visiting Rome in athe holidays some years ago, with its pizzeas and history.

With thehen I visit toed the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; It was like to enter in theg ancient Rome, and stepping on the same sand thatas the gladiators.

However, I also would also like to go to Japan, because is a country very different from mine, but at same time, I know a little bit about it.

We have a wonderful planet to discover.

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Great writing!

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Ducky

July 8, 2022

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Thanks.

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For comfort I would choose to live in France.


For comfort, I would choose to live in France.

For comfort, I would choose to live in France.

For comfort I would choose to live in France because I am most comfortable there.

For comfort, I would choose to live in France.

I love the little French towns, their people and their food.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love the little French towns, their people, and their food.

For French towns in general, 'the' is not necessary. E.g: I love all French towns with old churches! Which of the French towns on this map do you want to see?

I love the little French townstowns there, their people and their food.

I love the little French towns, their people and their food.

Italy would be a good candidate too.


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Italy would also be a good candidate too.

I enjoyed a lot in Rome in a holidays some years ago, with its pizzes and history.


I really enjoyed a lot visiting Rome in athe holidays some years ago, with its pizzeas and history.

I enjoyed a lotbeing in Rome ia lot on a holidays some years ago, with its pizzeas and history.

I really enjoyed a lot in Rome in a holidaysmy holidays/vacation in Rome some years ago, along with its pizzeas and history.

I enjoyed Rome a lot in Rome in aduring holidays some years ago, with its pizzesas' and history.

With the visit to the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; It was like to enter in the ancient Rome, stepping the same sand that the gladiators.


With thehen I visit toed the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; It was like to enter in theg ancient Rome, and stepping on the same sand thatas the gladiators.

With theDuring my visit to the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; It was like to enter in theg ancient Rome, stepping on the same sand that the gladiators did.

With theI had a strangle feeling when I visit toed the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; Iit was like to enter in theg ancient Rome, stepping. I was walking on the same sand that the gladiators did.

With the visit to the Coliseum, I felt a strangle feeling; It was like to enter in theing into ancient Rome, stepping on the same sand thatas the gladiators.

However, I also would like to go to Japan, because is a country very different from mine, but at same time, I know a little.


However, I also would also like to go to Japan, because is a country very different from mine, but at same time, I know a little bit about it.

However, I also would like to go to Japan, because it is a country very different from mine, but at same time, I know a little.

However, I also would like to go to Japan, because is a countryt is very different from miney country, but at the same time, I know a little about it.

However, I alsoIn addition, I would also like to go to Japan, because it is a country very different from mine, but at same time, I know a little about it.

We have a wonderful planet to discover.


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