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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 30, 2021

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Travel to Museums

When I travel abroad, I usually visit museums about the histories of the cities.

For example, when I visited in Warsaw in Poland, I went to four museums.

At first, I went to the Warsaw national museum and the Uprising museum to understand the city during WW II.

Next, I visited the Chopin museum and Madame Curie museum to know famous people in Poland.

I learned this routine when I treated an Israelites professor when I was a master course student.

He was the first time to visit to Korea, and he selected the first place to go the Korea National Museum.

I didn't understand why he wanted to go there first.

He said, with the museum, he could understand more about the country, the culture and famous places.

His words hit me, and I have tried to visit museums like him whether or not I can understand the guide in the museums.

I highly recommend this routine.

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Traveling to Museums

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For example, when I visited in Warsaw in Poland, I went to four museums.

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I didn't understand why he wanted to go there first.

He said, with the museum, he could understandlearn more more about the country, the culture and famous places.

His words hitmade an impact on me, and I have tried to visit museums like hime did whether or not I can understand the guide in the museums.

I highly recommend this routine.

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 1, 2021

402

Thank you so much.

Travel to Museums


Traveling to Museums

When I travel abroad, I usually visit museums about the histories of the cities.


When I travel abroad, I usually visit museums to learn about the historiesy of the cities that I visit.

For example, when I visited in Warsaw in Poland, I went to four museums.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At first, I went to the Warsaw national museum and the Uprising museum to understand the city during WW II.


At fFirst, I went to the Warsaw nNational mMuseum and to the Uprising museum to understand how the city was during WW II.

Next, I visited the Chopin museum and Madame Curie museum to know famous people in Poland.


Next, I visited the Chopin museum and Madame Curie museum to knowlearn about famous people in Poland.

I learned this routine when I treated an Israelites professor when I was a master course student.


I learnedpicked up this routine when I treatedof visiting museums while I worked with an Israelites professor when I was a master course student.

He was the first time to visit to Korea, and he selected the first place to go the Korea National Museum.


HeIt was the first time tohe visit toed Korea, and the selected the first place to go the Korea National MuseumKorea National Museum was the first place he chose to visit.

I didn't understand why he wanted to go there first.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He said, with the museum, he could understand more about the country, the culture and famous places.


He said, with the museum, he could understandlearn more more about the country, the culture and famous places.

His words hit me, and I have tried to visit museums like him whether or not I can understand the guide in the museums.


His words hitmade an impact on me, and I have tried to visit museums like hime did whether or not I can understand the guide in the museums.

I highly recommend this routine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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