Nov. 17, 2023
Travel to Mt. Fuji
I went on a Mt. Fuji bus tour with my friend.
I’m glad I was able to go see Mt. Fuji with her on the three days off it was really crowded though.
She always takes really good pictures! I enjoy being her photos model! Lol
I really enjoy spending time with my foreign friends and guiding them around Japan. I want to do only things that I like and fill up my life with happiness.
Travel to Mt. Fuji
I went on a Mt.
Fuji bus tour with my friend.
I’m glad I was able to go see Mt.
Fuji with her on theduring my three days off i. It was really crowded though.
She always takes really good pictures!
I enjoy being her photos model!
Lol,
¶I really enjoy spending time with my foreign friends and guiding them around Japan.
I only want to do only things that I like and fill up my life with happiness.
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Nice job!
I went on a Mt.
Fuji bus tour with my friend.
I’m glad I was able to go see Mt.
Fuji with her on the three days off, but it was really crowded though.
She always takes really good pictures!
I enjoy being her photos model!
Lol I really enjoy spending time with my foreign friends and guiding them around Japan.
I only want to do only things that I like and fill up my life with happiness.
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Great entry!
Travel to Mt. Fuji
*You can also say "Traveling to Mt. Fuji" or "Visiting Mt. Fuji with Friends"
I’m glad I was able to go see Mt.
Fuji with her on the three days off it was really crowded though.
I'm glad I was able to go visit Mt. Fuji with her on my days off, though it was crowded with tourists.
I enjoy being her photos model!
She loves taking photos and I enjoy modeling for her!
Lol
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I really enjoy spending time with my foreign friends and guiding them around Japan.
I want to do only things that I like and fill up my life with happiness.
I only want to do things that fill up my life with happiness.
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"I only want to do things that fill up my life with happiness" Wow, I love that thought. And I would love to visit Mt. Fuji one day. Thanks for sharing!
Travel to Mt. Fuji
Or "Travelling to Mt. Fuji"
I went on a Mt.
Fuji bus tour with my friend.
Or "I went on a bus tour of Mt. Fuji with my friend."
I’m glad I was able to (go) see Mt.
Fuji with her on theour three days off, but it was really crowded (though).
But + though is okay, but picking one or the other is best.
She always takes really good pictures!
I enjoy being her photos model!
Or "I enjoy modeling in her photos."
Lol I really enjoy spending time with my foreign friends and guiding them around Japan.
I want to do only the things that I like and fill up my life with happiness.
Or "I want to fill up my life with happiness by doing only the things (that) I like."
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It was fun :) And you are a great model!
Nov. 17, 2023
Correcting ありがとう！！
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