June 1, 2025
Travel six one day
Today I accompanied my buddy for a meal – we had roasted lamb head. Then I relaxed for a while on a massage chair, took a taxi to watch a film, which was my childhood favorite: Lilo & Stitch. Finally, we each had a bowl of Korean-style cold noodles before heading back.
今天陪兄弟吃了顿饭，吃得是烤羊头。然后在按摩椅上躺了一会会，之后又打了车去看电影，看得是童年回忆，史迪奇的大冒险。最后吃了一碗韩式冷面就回去了。
Travel six one day
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All of this is grammatically correct in English other than your title "Travel six one day", which I'm not sure what you mean. However, to sound more natural I would break up the middle sentence about the massage chair, taxi and film into a couple of sentences.
Today I was accompanied by my buddy for a meal – we had roasted lamb head together.
Then I relaxed for a while on a massage chair, took a taxi to watch a film, which was my childhood favorite: Lilo & Stitch.
Travel six one dayDay Six
Do you mean to say this is your sixth day of travel, if so, this is how!
Today I accompanied my buddy for a meal – we had roasted lamb head.
Then I relaxed for a while on a massage chair, and took a taxi to watch a film, which that was my childhood favorite: Lilo & Stitch.
Finally, we each had a bowl of Korean-style cold noodles before heading back.
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Well done!
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Travel six one day Travel Do you mean to say this is your sixth day of travel, if so, this is how! Travel six one day |
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Today I accompanied my buddy for a meal – we had roasted lamb head. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Today I was accompanied by my buddy for a meal – we had roasted lamb head together. |
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Then I relaxed for a while on a massage chair, took a taxi to watch a film, which was my childhood favorite: Lilo & Stitch. Then I relaxed for a while on a massage chair
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Finally, we each had a bowl of Korean-style cold noodles before heading back. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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