May 16, 2023
Travel by Walking
It's mostly cloudy with a high of 20 degrees Celsius today. A new walking path has recently been built in a nearby mountain park. Three days ago, three of my old classmates invited me to go on a hike with them today.
We are planning to spend two hours on the first part of the hike from 10:00 to 12:00. We will have lunch at a hot pot restaurant near the walking path. Then, we will spend about four more hours for the rest of the path. We will end our hike at another exit of the park.
We haven't seen each other for over two years. It's a pleasure time for us today, I am looking forward to it and will head out when finish this entry.
Travel by Walking
It's mostly cloudy with a high of 20 degrees Celsius today.
A new walking path has recently been built in a nearby mountain park.
Three days ago, three of my old classmates invited me to go on a hike with them today.
We are planning to spend two hours on the first part of the hike from 10:00 to 12:00.
Then, we will spend about four more hours for the rest of the path.
Then we will spend about four more hours for the rest of the path
We will end our hike at another exit of the park.
Would flow a little bit better to combine this with the previous sentence. "Then we will spend about four more hours on the rest of the path and end our hike at another exit to the park"
It's a pleasure time for us today, I am looking forward to it and will head out when finish this entry.
"Pleasure" doens't make sense here. Maybe try, "I will be a good time for us today" or "It is a a happy/exciting time for us today". There is also a missing "I" in the second half. It shoud read "and will head out when I finish this entry".
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Excellent job! Just a couple of tiny errors that even a native speaker might make
May 16, 2023
Thank you so much for your corrections! :-)
Travel by Walking
It's mostly cloudy with a high of 20 degrees Celsius today.
A new walking path has recently been built in a nearby mountain park.
また、
A new walking path has recently been built at a nearby mountain park.
Three days ago, three of my old classmates invited me to go on a hike with them today.
We are planning to spend two hours on the first part of the hike from 10:00 to 12:00.
We will have lunch at a hot pot restaurant near the walking path.
Then, we will spend about four more hours foron the rest of the path.
We will end our hike at another exit of the park.
あるいは、
We will end our hike at a different exit of the park.
We haven't seen each other for over two years.
It's a pleasure timeholiday(?) for us today, so I am looking forward to it and will head out when I finish this entry.
楽しそうです！
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すごいですね。楽しんで下さい！そして、今回もとても上手に書けています！
May 16, 2023
素晴らしい時間、ありがとうございました！:-)
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It's mostly cloudy with a high of 20 degrees Celsius today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A new walking path has recently been built in a nearby mountain park. A new walking path has recently been built in a nearby mountain park. また、 A new walking path has recently been built at a nearby mountain park. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Three days ago, three of my old classmates invited me to go on a hike with them today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We are planning to spend two hours on the first part of the hike from 10:00 to 12:00. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We will have lunch at a hot pot restaurant near the walking path. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then, we will spend about four more hours for the rest of the path. Then, we will spend about four more hours Then, we will spend about four more hours for the rest of the path. Then we will spend about four more hours for the rest of the path |
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We will end our hike at another exit of the park. We will end our hike at another exit of the park. あるいは、 We will end our hike at a different exit of the park. We will end our hike at another exit of the park. Would flow a little bit better to combine this with the previous sentence. "Then we will spend about four more hours on the rest of the path and end our hike at another exit to the park" |
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We haven't seen each other for over two years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's a pleasure time for us today, I am looking forward to it and will head out when finish this entry. It's a 楽しそうです！ It's a pleasure time for us today, I am looking forward to it and will head out when finish this entry. "Pleasure" doens't make sense here. Maybe try, "I will be a good time for us today" or "It is a a happy/exciting time for us today". There is also a missing "I" in the second half. It shoud read "and will head out when I finish this entry". |
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