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Travel around World
I want to travel around the world, because I want to know and discorver news traditions and cities. I want to go to France, England, Germany, Italy, Canada and Japan. I know that can to be difficult but I will try in a near future.
Quiero viajar por el mundo porque quiero conocer y descubrir nuevas tradiciones y ciudades. Quiero ir a Francia, Inglaterra, Alemania, Italia, Canada y Japon. Se que puede ser dificil pero lo intentare en un futuro cercano.
Travelling around World
"Travelling" = British English
"Traveling" = American English
I want to travel around the world, because I want to knowunderstand and discorver news traditions and cities.
"know" doesn't really fit here as it doesn't sound too natural
I haven't changed it but instead of "traditions", you could use "cultures" as that refers to life in different countries as a whole :)
I know that it can to be difficult but I will try in athe near future.
"the near future" as putting "a near future" implies there are multiple near futures when there's only one :)
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Travel around World Travelling around World "Travelling" = British English "Traveling" = American English |
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I want to travel around the world, because I want to know and discorver news traditions and cities. I want to travel around the world "know" doesn't really fit here as it doesn't sound too natural I haven't changed it but instead of "traditions", you could use "cultures" as that refers to life in different countries as a whole :) |
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I want to go to France, England, Germany, Italy, Canada and Japan. |
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I know that can to be difficult but I will try in a near future. I know that it can to be difficult but I will try in "the near future" as putting "a near future" implies there are multiple near futures when there's only one :) |
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