Aug. 7, 2021
Travel Abroad
I really like to travel abroad.
Before getting the airplane, I am filled with anticipation.
I hope for nice scene, good atmosphere and people's life style there.
During traveling, I always make good memories and take pictures as many as I can.
Everything there is always a load of fun.
I usually buy souvenirs which I can reminisce about the memories.
And I also buy some gifts for my family and my friends.
After returning home, I feel wistful and write in my diary and my blog about those days.
Because of Covid 19, I can't go anywhere now.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.
Travel Abroad
I really like to travel abroad.
Before getting on the airplane, I am filled with anticipation.
verb form is "to get on (something)"
I hope for nice scenery, good atmosphere and people's life to see different lifestyles there.
It's a little unclear what you are trying to say with "people's life style there" so I have corrected it with my interpretation of what you are trying to say
DuringWhile traveling, I always make good memories and take as many pictures as many as I can.
Usually "during" is followed by a noun, and "while" is followed by an activity.
the correct form is "as many [something] as...]
Everything there is always a load of fun.
I usually buy souvenirs whichso I can reminisce about the memories.
And I also buy some gifts for my family and my friends.
After returning home, I feel wistful and write in my diary and my blog about those days.
This is a correct sentence, but for your information "wistful" is an uncommon word in written and especially spoken English
Because of Covid 19, I can't go anywhere now.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.
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Well written, only minor mistakes :)
Aug. 8, 2021
Thank you very much!
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Travel Abroad This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really like to travel abroad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before getting the airplane, I am filled with anticipation. Before getting on the airplane, I am filled with anticipation. verb form is "to get on (something)" |
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I hope for nice scene, good atmosphere and people's life style there. I hope for nice scenery, good atmosphere and It's a little unclear what you are trying to say with "people's life style there" so I have corrected it with my interpretation of what you are trying to say |
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During traveling, I always make good memories and take pictures as many as I can.
Usually "during" is followed by a noun, and "while" is followed by an activity. the correct form is "as many [something] as...] |
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Everything there is always a load of fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I usually buy souvenirs which I can reminisce about the memories. I usually buy souvenirs |
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And I also buy some gifts for my family and my friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After returning home, I feel wistful and write in my diary and my blog about those days. After returning home, I feel wistful and write in my diary and my blog about those days. This is a correct sentence, but for your information "wistful" is an uncommon word in written and especially spoken English |
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Because of Covid 19, I can't go anywhere now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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