[Translation Practice] The Harshness of nNature seen from cas Seen by a Crow

These days crows have been cawing loudly since morningdaybreak.

A pair of them were flying around my house while others were noisily croaking while perchinged on utility poles, tall trees, and the rooftops of neighbors.

I have a picture book titled “Crow bBoy.” The storyline is that a boy, who is isolated in school, showgives a performance of making a crow noises in the school play.

His performance of various crow sounds made by crows impresseds other students and, after they know therealize how difficult situation of his is for him to cominge to school fromover a long distance, they shed tears.

One morning, I got awakened by uproars bya cacophony of crows.

Seeing fromLooking out the window, I saw two crows were pecking at something in thea rice puddle.

I flew there to find a bigran to where they were and found a large crow lying there immobilemotionless.

I guessed this crow gave in after fighting over territory.

Idly I wondered idly if this dead crow had a partner or children as we humans have.

I became numb knowing there exists a helpless hashruthless law of nature beyond our control.

[Translation Practice] Harshness of nature, as seen fromby a crow.

These days, the crows have been loud sincfrom the morning.

A pair of them were flying around my house, while others noisily croakinged, perching on utility poles, tall trees, and the rooftops of neighbours.

I have a picture book titled “Crow bBoy.”. The storyline is that a boy, who is isolated in school, showgives a performance of making a crow noises in the school play.

His performance of various sounds made by crows impressed other students, and after they know thehis difficult situation of his comy in getting to school from a long distancefar away, they shed tears.

Remembering thavingt I read this book before, I wondered why those crows were making noises.

One morning, I gotwas awakened by uproars by crowscrows making an uproar.

Seeing fFrom the window, I saw that two crows were pecking something in the rice puddla puddle of rice.

I flewran there to find a big crow lying there, immobile.

I guessed that this crow gave in after fighting over territory.

Idly I wondered if this dead crow had a partner or children, as we humans have.

I becamefelt numb knowing there exists a helplessat nature has its own harsh law of natures beyond our control.

[Translation Practice] Harshness of nature seen fromfrom the perspective of a crow

These days crows have been loud sinceall morning.

These days is talking about multiple days, but since morning is just talking about this morning.

A pair of them were flying around my house while others noisily croaking perching on utility poles, tall trees, and the rooftops of neighborneighbours' rooftops.

The rooftops belong to your neighbours. When a plural word which already ends in s would usually have an ('s) after it then you put the apostrophe after the s.
https://apostrophe.guide/apostrophe-after-s/

I have a picture book titled “Crow boy.” T”. In the storyline is that, a boy, who is isolated in school, shows a performance of making a crow noiseplays the role of a crow in the school play.

His performance of various sounds made by crowcrow noises impressed the other students, and after they know the difficult situation of his coming to school from a long distance, they shed tearsthey cried when they learned that he had to come so far to get to school.

Yours isn't wrong but it sounds very formal.

One morning, I gotwas awakened by uproars by crowscrows making an uproar.

Seeing fFrom the window, I could see two crows were pecking something in the rice puddle.

I flew there to find a big crow lying there immobile.

Don't say there twice