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Censorship of art and artists
The censorship of art and artists is a complex topic that has existed along history, reflecting the tension between freedom of speech and social rules. Censorship could be shown in different ways, starting from prohibition of art works, until selfcensorship from the artists themselves, who may be afraid of grudges or criticism. This phenomenom don’t just affect individual creativity, but also limits cultural and social speech that art can motivate.
Often, censorship it’s justified for the sake of morality, politics or religion. However, this restriction can lead to the lost of important voices and homogenization of thought. Artists such as Pablo Picasso and Frida Kahlo have faced censorship at different times, but their resilience have open some place to art works that challenge conventionalism and motivate deep reflexions about human condition.
Art has the power of questioning, provoke and, sometimes, incomodate. Censorship, in the process of trying to silence these voices, not just deprive society of enriching experiences, but exposes the fear to the confrontation as well. In an ideal world, art should be a safe space for exploration and expression, where differences are celebrated instead of being repressed. The fight against censorship is, as a conclusion, a defense of creative freedom and a called out for the open and diversity in the artistic area.


Censura de arte y artistas
La censura del arte y los artistas es un tema complejo que ha existido a lo largo de la historia, reflejando las tensiones entre la libertad de expresión y las normas sociales. La censura puede manifestarse de diversas formas, desde la prohibición de obras hasta la autocensura por parte de los propios artistas, quienes pueden temer represalias o críticas. Este fenómeno no solo afecta la creatividad individual, sino que también limita el diálogo cultural y social que el arte puede fomentar.
A menudo, la censura se justifica en nombre de la moralidad, la política o la religión. Sin embargo, esta restricción puede llevar a la pérdida de voces importantes y a la homogenización del pensamiento. Artistas como Pablo Picasso y Frida Kahlo han enfrentado censura en diferentes momentos, pero su resistencia ha dado lugar a obras que desafían las convenciones y provocan reflexiones profundas sobre la condición humana.
El arte tiene el poder de cuestionar, provocar y, en ocasiones, incomodar. La censura, al intentar silenciar estas voces, no solo priva a la sociedad de experiencias enriquecedoras, sino que también revela el miedo a la confrontación de ideas. En un mundo ideal, el arte debería ser un espacio seguro para la exploración y la expresión, donde las diferencias se celebren en lugar de ser reprimidas. La lucha contra la censura es, por lo tanto, una defensa de la libertad creativa y un llamado a la apertura y la diversidad en el ámbito artístico.

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Censorship of art and artists

The censorship of art and artists is a complex topic that has existed
alongthroughout history, reflecting the tension between freedom of speech and social rules.

Censorship could be shownperformed in different ways, starting from prohibition of art works, untilto self censorship fromby the artists themselves, who may be afraid of grjudgesment or criticism.

This phenomenom don’t just affect individual creativity, but also limits the cultural and social speechactivity that art can motivate.

Often, censorship it’s justified for the sake of morality, politics or religion.

However, this restriction can lead to the losts of important voices and homogenization of thought.

Artists such as Pablo Picasso and Frida Kahlo have faced censorship at different times, but their resilience haves opened some places to art works that challenge conventionalism ideas and motivate deep reflexctions about human condition.

Art has the power ofto ask questionings, provoke and, sometimes, incomodate (?).

incomodate is not an English word, not sure what you mean here

Censorship, in the process of trying to silence these voices, nodoesn't just deprive society of enriching experiences, but exposes the fear to theartist to fear of confrontation as well.

In an ideal world, art should be a safe space for exploration and expression, where differences are celebrated instead of being repressed.

The fight against censorship is, as a conclusion, a defense of creative freedom and a called ousupport for the open and diversitye expression in the artistic area.

Translation practice for IELTS topics 1

Censorship of art and artists
The censorship of art and artists is a complex topic that has existed
alongthroughout history, reflecting the tension between freedom of speech and social rules.

Sounds smoother this way

Censorship could be shownan occur in different ways, starting from prohibition ofng art works, until to self-censorship from the artists themselves, who may be afraid of grudges or criticism.

This phenomenom don’es not just affect individual creativity, but also limits cultural and social speech that art can motivatediscussions inspired by art.

Often, censorship it’s justified for the sake of morality, politics or religion.

However, this restriction can lead to the losts of important voices and the homogenization of thought.

Artists such as Pablo Picasso and Frida Kahlo have both faced censorship at different times, but theiry resilience have open some place totly continued to produce art works that challenged conventionalism and motivate deep and inspired meaningful reflexctions about the human condition.

Art has the power tof questioning, provoke and, sometimes, incommodate.

Censorship, in the process of trying toby silenceing these voices, not justonly deprives society of enriching experiences, but also exposes the fear to the confrontation as wellcensor's fears.

TIn conclusion, the fight against censorship is, as a conclusion, a defense of creative freedom and a called out for the open and diversity in the artistic area.

Translation pPractice for IELTS tTopics 1

Censorship of aArt and aArtists
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ensorship of art and artists is a complex topic that has existed alongthroughout history, reflecting the tension between freedom of speech and social rulenorms.

Don't forget capitalization rules for titles in English.

Censorship could be shown in different ways, startingan manifest itself in various ways, from prohibition of art works, until to self-censorship fromby the artists themselves, who may be afraid of grudgereprisals or criticism.

This phenomenomn doesn’t just affect individual creativity, but also limits the cultural and social speechdialogue that art can motivafoster.

Often, censorship it’s justified for the sake of morality, politics, or religion.

The serial comma is optional, but I prefer it for clarity.

However, this restriction can lead to the losts of important voices and homogenization of thought.

Artists such as Pablo Picasso and Frida Kahlo have faced censorship at different times, but their resilience have open some places lead to art works that challenge conventionalism and motivat and provoke deep reflexions abouton the human condition.

Art has the power tof questioning,, to provoke, and, someat times, incomodateto cause discomfort.

Censorship, in the process of trying to silence these voices, not justonly deprives society of enriching experiences, but also exposes thea fear to the confrontationing them as well.

In an ideal world, art should be a safe space for exploration and expression, where differences are celebrated instead of being repressed.

The fight against censorship is, as a conclusion, therefore a defense of creative freedom and a called out for the openness and diversity in the artistic arealm.

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Overall, very good. My corrections are a little closer to the original, I think. Hope it helps. Good luck!

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gabs13789

March 19, 2025

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This was really helpful, thank you so much.

Translation practice for IELTS topics 1

Censorship of art and artists The censorship of art and artists is a complex topic that has existed along history, reflecting the tension between freedom of speech and social rules.

Censorship could be shown in different ways, starting from prohibition of art works, until selfcensorship from the artists themselves, who may be afraid of grudges or criticism.

This phenomenom don’t just affect individual creativity, but also limits cultural and social speech that art can motivate.

Often, censorship it’s justified for the sake of morality, politics or religion.

However, this restriction can lead to the lost of important voices and homogenization of thought.

Artists such as Pablo Picasso and Frida Kahlo have faced censorship at different times, but their resilience have open some place to art works that challenge conventionalism and motivate deep reflexions about human condition.

Art has the power of questioning, provoke and, sometimes, incomodate.

Censorship, in the process of trying to silence these voices, not just deprive society of enriching experiences, but exposes the fear to the confrontation as well.

In an ideal world, art should be a safe space for exploration and expression, where differences are celebrated instead of being repressed.

The fight against censorship is, as a conclusion, a defense of creative freedom and a called out for the open and diversity in the artistic area.

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starryjune

March 19, 2025

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Great vocabulary for an advanced topic! I could understand your overall opinion and only had minor edits.

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gabs13789

March 19, 2025

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I'm trying to focus on the details too, so I really apreciate it. Thank you.

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Censorship of art and artists The censorship of art and artists is a complex topic that has existed along history, reflecting the tension between freedom of speech and social rules.


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Censorship of aArt and aArtists
The c

C
ensorship of art and artists is a complex topic that has existed alongthroughout history, reflecting the tension between freedom of speech and social rulenorms.

Don't forget capitalization rules for titles in English.

Censorship of art and artists
The censorship of art and artists is a complex topic that has existed
alongthroughout history, reflecting the tension between freedom of speech and social rules.

Sounds smoother this way

Censorship of art and artists

The censorship of art and artists is a complex topic that has existed
alongthroughout history, reflecting the tension between freedom of speech and social rules.

Censorship could be shown in different ways, starting from prohibition of art works, until selfcensorship from the artists themselves, who may be afraid of grudges or criticism.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Censorship could be shown in different ways, startingan manifest itself in various ways, from prohibition of art works, until to self-censorship fromby the artists themselves, who may be afraid of grudgereprisals or criticism.

Censorship could be shownan occur in different ways, starting from prohibition ofng art works, until to self-censorship from the artists themselves, who may be afraid of grudges or criticism.

Censorship could be shownperformed in different ways, starting from prohibition of art works, untilto self censorship fromby the artists themselves, who may be afraid of grjudgesment or criticism.

This phenomenom don’t just affect individual creativity, but also limits cultural and social speech that art can motivate.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This phenomenomn doesn’t just affect individual creativity, but also limits the cultural and social speechdialogue that art can motivafoster.

This phenomenom don’es not just affect individual creativity, but also limits cultural and social speech that art can motivatediscussions inspired by art.

This phenomenom don’t just affect individual creativity, but also limits the cultural and social speechactivity that art can motivate.

Often, censorship it’s justified for the sake of morality, politics or religion.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Often, censorship it’s justified for the sake of morality, politics, or religion.

The serial comma is optional, but I prefer it for clarity.

Often, censorship it’s justified for the sake of morality, politics or religion.

Often, censorship it’s justified for the sake of morality, politics or religion.

However, this restriction can lead to the lost of important voices and homogenization of thought.


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However, this restriction can lead to the losts of important voices and homogenization of thought.

However, this restriction can lead to the losts of important voices and the homogenization of thought.

However, this restriction can lead to the losts of important voices and homogenization of thought.

Artists such as Pablo Picasso and Frida Kahlo have faced censorship at different times, but their resilience have open some place to art works that challenge conventionalism and motivate deep reflexions about human condition.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Artists such as Pablo Picasso and Frida Kahlo have faced censorship at different times, but their resilience have open some places lead to art works that challenge conventionalism and motivat and provoke deep reflexions abouton the human condition.

Artists such as Pablo Picasso and Frida Kahlo have both faced censorship at different times, but theiry resilience have open some place totly continued to produce art works that challenged conventionalism and motivate deep and inspired meaningful reflexctions about the human condition.

Artists such as Pablo Picasso and Frida Kahlo have faced censorship at different times, but their resilience haves opened some places to art works that challenge conventionalism ideas and motivate deep reflexctions about human condition.

Art has the power of questioning, provoke and, sometimes, incomodate.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Art has the power tof questioning,, to provoke, and, someat times, incomodateto cause discomfort.

Art has the power tof questioning, provoke and, sometimes, incommodate.

Art has the power ofto ask questionings, provoke and, sometimes, incomodate (?).

incomodate is not an English word, not sure what you mean here

Censorship, in the process of trying to silence these voices, not just deprive society of enriching experiences, but exposes the fear to the confrontation as well.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Censorship, in the process of trying to silence these voices, not justonly deprives society of enriching experiences, but also exposes thea fear to the confrontationing them as well.

Censorship, in the process of trying toby silenceing these voices, not justonly deprives society of enriching experiences, but also exposes the fear to the confrontation as wellcensor's fears.

Censorship, in the process of trying to silence these voices, nodoesn't just deprive society of enriching experiences, but exposes the fear to theartist to fear of confrontation as well.

In an ideal world, art should be a safe space for exploration and expression, where differences are celebrated instead of being repressed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In an ideal world, art should be a safe space for exploration and expression, where differences are celebrated instead of being repressed.

In an ideal world, art should be a safe space for exploration and expression, where differences are celebrated instead of being repressed.

The fight against censorship is, as a conclusion, a defense of creative freedom and a called out for the open and diversity in the artistic area.


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The fight against censorship is, as a conclusion, therefore a defense of creative freedom and a called out for the openness and diversity in the artistic arealm.

TIn conclusion, the fight against censorship is, as a conclusion, a defense of creative freedom and a called out for the open and diversity in the artistic area.

The fight against censorship is, as a conclusion, a defense of creative freedom and a called ousupport for the open and diversitye expression in the artistic area.

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