Jan. 16, 2021
Translation practice A
"Intelligent robots" has always been concerned by many science and technology enthusiasts. With the advent of the 5g network era, date transmission speed becomes faster, AI, VR and artificial intelligence technologies are constantly improving, intelligence robots are used in more and more fields.
For example, some common sweeping robots, dishwashing robots, although simple, have brought convenience to people's lives, and some factories, unmanned banks and unmanned hotels have also begun to use intelligent robots instead of manpower.
When it comes to intelligent robots, we have to mention its branch"simulation robots"! Nowadays, many big countries in science and technology have launched their own "masterpieces" of simulation robots, such as Jiajia in China, Miss Mumo in Japan, and Henry in the United States, among which, the Japan "Wife" series simulation robots are undoubtedly the most concerned.
Why are Japanese simulation robots so famous? In fact, the reason is so simple, because Japan, like China, is a country with a serious imbalance between men and women, and single men in their thirties and forties are also very common in Japan, so Japanese scientists have developed a "simulated female robots" to meet the needs of many old single men.
Translation practice A
"Intelligent robots" has always been concerned byof interest to many science and technology enthusiasts.
When you are 'concerned' about something it can mean that you are worried about it. I think you're wanting to say that people are interested/fascinated/captivated by the subject (a positive opinion).
With the advent of the 5g network era, date transmission speed is becomesing faster,. AI, VR and artificial intelligence technologies are constantly improving, and intelligence robots are used in more and more fields.
Be careful with using really long sentences strung together with commas. Using a full stop/period and starting a new sentence can help the reader understand the text more easily.
For example, some common sweeping robots, and dishwashing robots, although simple, have brought convenience to people's lives, and. In addition, some factories, unmanned banks and unmanned hotels have also begun to use intelligent robots instead of manpower.
If we split this into two sentences, it is easier to read.
When it comes to intelligent robots, we have to mention its branchthe related topic of "simulation robots"!
Nowadays, many big countries advanced in science and technology have launched their own "masterpieces" of simulation robots, such as Jiajia in China, Miss Mumo in Japan, and Henry in the United States, among which, the Japan "Wife" series simulation robots are series is undoubtedly theof most concernedinterest.
Why are Japanese simulation robots so famous?
In fact, the reason is so simple, because: Japan, like China, is a country with a serious imbalance between men and women, and. Furthermore, single men in their thirties and forties are also very common in Japan, so. For these reasons, Japanese scientists have developed a "simulated female robots" to meet the needs of many old, single men.
There are lots of commas in your original sentence which makes it a bit hard to read.
Feedback
Well done on this piece. There are a lot of areas where you use the comma (,) very well. There are other areas where it is not necessary.
Sometimes writing shorter sentences (rather than one really long sentence with lots of commas) can make the text easier to understand, and make your point clearer. You might like to look into how to use colons (:), semi-colons (;) and hyphens (-) in English too. These can also make your text become easier to read and more varied.
Again, well done.
Jan. 20, 2021
I also think that you should change your level to at least "B1" in English. I believe your writing ability is at this level. If you are not sure, there are sites where you can take a free test which gives you an idea of what level your English is in general. If you like, I can recommend a site to do this.
I think people will be confused if they see your level is "A1", and then look at your writing. They may even give up wanting to correct it because it was not the level they were expecting. So it is probably best both for you and for everyone correcting work on this site if you change your level :)
Jan. 20, 2021
Thank you very much.
Jan. 20, 2021
I also think that you should change your level to at least "B1" in English. I believe your writing ability is at this level. If you are not sure, there are sites where you can take a free test which gives you an idea of what level your English is in general. If you like, I can recommend a site to do this. I think people will be confused if they see your level is "A1", and then look at your writing. They may even give up wanting to correct it because it was not the level they were expecting. So it is probably best both for you and for everyone correcting work on this site if you change your level :)
Ok, please send me the test site, meanwhile I am going to change my level to B1. Thank you very much.
Jan. 20, 2021
I have changed my English level to B1. Thank you for your suggestion.
Feb. 18, 2021
Hi, here are a couple of links to free online English placement tests, if you are interested:
https://www.cambridgeenglish.org/test-your-english/
https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/online-english-level-test
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Translation practice A This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"Intelligent robots" has always been concerned by many science and technology enthusiasts. "Intelligent robots" has always been When you are 'concerned' about something it can mean that you are worried about it. I think you're wanting to say that people are interested/fascinated/captivated by the subject (a positive opinion). |
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With the advent of the 5g network era, date transmission speed becomes faster, AI, VR and artificial intelligence technologies are constantly improving, intelligence robots are used in more and more fields. With the advent of the 5g network era, date transmission speed is becom Be careful with using really long sentences strung together with commas. Using a full stop/period and starting a new sentence can help the reader understand the text more easily. |
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For example, some common sweeping robots, dishwashing robots, although simple, have brought convenience to people's lives, and some factories, unmanned banks and unmanned hotels have also begun to use intelligent robots instead of manpower. For example, some common sweeping robots If we split this into two sentences, it is easier to read. |
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When it comes to intelligent robots, we have to mention its branch"simulation robots"! When it comes to intelligent robots, we have to mention |
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Nowadays, many big countries in science and technology have launched their own "masterpieces" of simulation robots, such as Jiajia in China, Miss Mumo in Japan, and Henry in the United States, among which, the Japan "Wife" series simulation robots are undoubtedly the most concerned. Nowadays, many |
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Why are Japanese simulation robots so famous? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In fact, the reason is so simple, because Japan, like China, is a country with a serious imbalance between men and women, and single men in their thirties and forties are also very common in Japan, so Japanese scientists have developed a "simulated female robots" to meet the needs of many old single men. In fact, the reason is so simple There are lots of commas in your original sentence which makes it a bit hard to read. |
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