Feb. 15, 2021
Translation Practice
Thanks to all the friends who watched the short film. I'm Tom. Like me, many people want to own a piece of land, grow vegetables and flowers... and live a pastoral life like Tao Yuanming. Many friends sent me private messages to rent such a land. As a self-media person, I can't recommend it to you, because I haven't fully grasped the things inside, and the water is too deep. Please wait patiently, I will really help you. Thank you again for your trust. Please follow me and get more fan benefits.
Translation Practice
Thanks to all themy friends who watched the short film.
I'm Tom.
Like me, many people want to own a piece of land, grow vegetables and flowers..., and live a pastoral life like Tao Yuanming.
"Pastoral life" isn't a very common phrase. In this case, "live off the land like Tao Yuanming" would probably sound more natural.
Here, the commas seperate independent clauses, as opposed to acting as a list, which is why you can use "X and X, and X"
Many friendspeople sent me private messages abouto renting such a land.
As a self-media person, I can't recommend it to you, because I haven't fully grasped the things inside, and the water is toowhat's required, and I'm out of my deepth.
I'm not quite sure what you mean by "self-media person". Perhaps "media producer" or "social-media creator".
The water is too deep= In English we'd say "it's out of my depth".
Please wait patiently, I will reallydo my best to help you.
Thank you again for your trust.
Please follow me andto get more fan benefits.
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Although "friends" conveys a sense of closeness/friendliness, it sounda a bit weird to call strangers "friends".
Feb. 15, 2021
Thank you very much. Somewhere in the passage that you are trying to figure out is what you guessed.
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Thanks to all the friends who watched the short film. Thanks to all |
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I'm Tom. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like me, many people want to own a piece of land, grow vegetables and flowers... and live a pastoral life like Tao Yuanming. Like me, many people want to own a piece of land, grow vegetables and flowers "Pastoral life" isn't a very common phrase. In this case, "live off the land like Tao Yuanming" would probably sound more natural. Here, the commas seperate independent clauses, as opposed to acting as a list, which is why you can use "X and X, and X" |
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Many friends sent me private messages to rent such a land. Many |
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As a self-media person, I can't recommend it to you, because I haven't fully grasped the things inside, and the water is too deep. As a self-media person, I can't recommend it to you, because I haven't fully grasped I'm not quite sure what you mean by "self-media person". Perhaps "media producer" or "social-media creator". The water is too deep= In English we'd say "it's out of my depth". |
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Please wait patiently, I will really help you. Please wait patiently, I will |
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Thank you again for your trust. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Please follow me and get more fan benefits. Please follow me |
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