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Jack

Feb. 2, 2021

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According to relevant statistics, there have been no confirmed COVID-19 cases in Shenyang for 20 consecutive days. However, the news related to the epidemic in Shenyang and attracting more attention is about the confirmed NO 1 case Mrs. Yin. It's reported that Mrs. Yin died on January 30, and this news has attracted many people's attention. But up to now, there has been no official announcement. However, in the past two months, as the NO 1 case in Shenyang, Mrs. Yin has been receiving much attention.

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According to relevantthe statistics, there haves been no confirmed COVID-19 cases in Shenyang for 20 consecutive days.

However, thea news related to the epidemic in Shenyang and case of Covid in Shenyang that has infected a Mrs. Yin has attractinged more attention is about the confirmed NO 1 case Mrs. Yin.n the news.

It's has been reported that Mrs. Yin died on January 30, and this news has attracted many people's attention.

But up to nowUp to this point, there has been no official announcements.

However, in the past two months, as the NO 1 case in Shenyang, Mrs. Yinthis new case has been receiving much attention.

I think this sentence is really repeating what you already wrote (ie: the fact that this case is getting more attention)

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Jack

Feb. 3, 2021

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Thank you very much

According to relevant statistics, there have been no confirmed COVID-19 cases in Shenyang for 20 consecutive days.

However, the news related to the epidemic in Shenyang andepidemic news attracting more attention in Shenyang is about the confirmed NO 1"patient zero" case Mrs. Yin.

In English we use the phrase "patient zero" for the first known person to contract a disease.

It's reported that Mrs. Yin died on January 30, and this news has attracted many people's attention.

But up to now, there has been no official announcement.

However, in the past two months, as the NO 1first case in Shenyang, Mrs. Yin has been receiving much attention.

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Jack

Feb. 2, 2021

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Thank you very much.

Translation Practice


According to relevant statistics, there have been no confirmed COVID-19 cases in Shenyang for 20 consecutive days.


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According to relevantthe statistics, there haves been no confirmed COVID-19 cases in Shenyang for 20 consecutive days.

However, the news related to the epidemic in Shenyang and attracting more attention is about the confirmed NO 1 case Mrs. Yin.


However, the news related to the epidemic in Shenyang andepidemic news attracting more attention in Shenyang is about the confirmed NO 1"patient zero" case Mrs. Yin.

In English we use the phrase "patient zero" for the first known person to contract a disease.

However, thea news related to the epidemic in Shenyang and case of Covid in Shenyang that has infected a Mrs. Yin has attractinged more attention is about the confirmed NO 1 case Mrs. Yin.n the news.

It's reported that Mrs. Yin died on January 30, and this news has attracted many people's attention.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's has been reported that Mrs. Yin died on January 30, and this news has attracted many people's attention.

But up to now, there has been no official announcement.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But up to nowUp to this point, there has been no official announcements.

However, in the past two months, as the NO 1 case in Shenyang, Mrs. Yin has been receiving much attention.


However, in the past two months, as the NO 1first case in Shenyang, Mrs. Yin has been receiving much attention.

However, in the past two months, as the NO 1 case in Shenyang, Mrs. Yinthis new case has been receiving much attention.

I think this sentence is really repeating what you already wrote (ie: the fact that this case is getting more attention)

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