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Jan. 1, 2021

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Translation Practice

Xiaowang’s phone rang and this was Linna’s call. Linna wanted to celebrate Xiaowang’s birthday on Wednesday and Xiaowang would be free on Wednesday. Linna told Xiaowang that her birthday party would be held at 7pm on Wednesday. There would be 23 guests. Xiaowang wanted to bring Linna a gift.

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Translation Practice

Xiaowang’s phone rang, and ithis was Linna’s call.

Or "it was a call from Linna."

Linna wanted to celebrate Xiaowang’s birthday on Wednesday, and Xiaowang would be free on Wednesday.

Linna told Xiaowang that heris birthday party would be held at 7pm on Wednesday.

In the phrase "someone's birthday party," "someone" is generally the person with the birthday. It might be fine though if you just wrote "her party."

There would be 23 guests.

Xiaowang wanted to bring Linna a gift.

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Jan. 12, 2021

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Xiaowang’s phone rang and this was Linna’s call.


Xiaowang’s phone rang, and ithis was Linna’s call.

Or "it was a call from Linna."

Linna wanted to celebrate Xiaowang’s birthday on Wednesday and Xiaowang would be free on Wednesday.


Linna wanted to celebrate Xiaowang’s birthday on Wednesday, and Xiaowang would be free on Wednesday.

Linna told Xiaowang that her birthday party would be held at 7pm on Wednesday.


Linna told Xiaowang that heris birthday party would be held at 7pm on Wednesday.

In the phrase "someone's birthday party," "someone" is generally the person with the birthday. It might be fine though if you just wrote "her party."

There would be 23 guests.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Xiaowang wanted to bring Linna a gift.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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