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Jack

Dec. 27, 2020

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I attend class from 2 to 3 pm, and then teach martial arts for an hour. At that time, the aunt left, so I looked after the little baby. We usually play in a garden. She likes making castles with mud, picking flowers, playing little cars and following insects to see what they are doing. I make dinner around 5 pm, and cut dishes and boil them in an electric high pressure pot. The child’s mom returns home at 5:30 pm. We drink tea together, talk about things that happened that day and then eat dinner together. It feels very warm. Attend class from 7 to 8, and then correct homework, take a bath, write journals, za-zen, sleep. Every day I live enrich and happy.

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I attend class from 2 to 3 pm, and then teach martial arts for an hour.

Atfter that time, the aunt left, my aunt will leave, so I looked after the little baby.

We usually play in athe garden.

She likes making castles with mud, picking flowers, playing little cars and following insects to see what they are doing.

I make dinner at around 5 pm, and cut. I cut up the dishes and boil them in an electric high pressure pot.

What do you mean by cutting dishes? Dishes cannot be cut, but maybe you mean vegetables?

The child’s momMy aunt returns home at 5:30 pm.

WFirst, we drink tea together,. We then talk about things that happened during thate day and then eat dinner togeth. Finally, we eat dinner.

ItThis routine makes me feels very warm. and tender

If you just say "it feels very warm", people must misconstrue your meaning, thinking the weather is hot.

Attend class from 7 to 8,From 7 to 8, I attend class again and then I correct my homework,. Afterwards, I take a bath, write my journals, za-zen, and sleep.

I'm not sure what za-zen is.

Every day Iach day, my livfe is enriched and happy.

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Jack

Dec. 28, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Translation practice.


I attend class from 2 to 3 pm, and then teach martial arts for an hour.


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At that time, the aunt left, so I looked after the little baby.


Atfter that time, the aunt left, my aunt will leave, so I looked after the little baby.

We usually play in a garden.


We usually play in athe garden.

She likes making castles with mud, picking flowers, playing little cars and following insects to see what they are doing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I make dinner around 5 pm, and cut dishes and boil them in an electric high pressure pot.


I make dinner at around 5 pm, and cut. I cut up the dishes and boil them in an electric high pressure pot.

What do you mean by cutting dishes? Dishes cannot be cut, but maybe you mean vegetables?

The child’s mom returns home at 5:30 pm.


The child’s momMy aunt returns home at 5:30 pm.

We drink tea together, talk about things that happened that day and then eat dinner together.


WFirst, we drink tea together,. We then talk about things that happened during thate day and then eat dinner togeth. Finally, we eat dinner.

It feels very warm.


ItThis routine makes me feels very warm. and tender

If you just say "it feels very warm", people must misconstrue your meaning, thinking the weather is hot.

Attend class from 7 to 8, and then correct homework, take a bath, write journals, za-zen, sleep.


Attend class from 7 to 8,From 7 to 8, I attend class again and then I correct my homework,. Afterwards, I take a bath, write my journals, za-zen, and sleep.

I'm not sure what za-zen is.

Every day I live enrich and happy.


Every day Iach day, my livfe is enriched and happy.

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