Jan. 11, 2021
Translation Practice
This strong girl has suffered so much in her heart for so many years! She not only bears the pain of suicide and protecting her younger brother, but also finds her father with her mother's last wish.
Liufu, this child who has experienced hardships since childhood. Although he is in poverty, he still passes his love down, and donated to the earthquake of Wenchuan.
Liufu, is this child who has experienced hardships since childhood.
If you remove everything after the comma, the only word is "Liufu". You'll either need to make it a sentence by putting in "is" like I've done above, or you have to put a comma after childhood and put a verb after that to make it a sentence.
Although he is in poverty, he still passes his love down, and he donated to the earthquake of Wenchuan.
When linking two independent clauses (sentence with subject and verb) using a conjunction like "and", you'll need a subject. "He" serves this purpose.
Side Note: "lives in poverty" would sound better, but "is in poverty" works too.
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Jan. 12, 2021
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Translation Practice |
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This strong girl has suffered so much in her heart for so many years! |
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She not only bears the pain of suicide and protecting her younger brother, but also finds her father with her mother's last wish. |
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Liufu, this child who has experienced hardships since childhood. Liufu If you remove everything after the comma, the only word is "Liufu". You'll either need to make it a sentence by putting in "is" like I've done above, or you have to put a comma after childhood and put a verb after that to make it a sentence. |
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Although he is in poverty, he still passes his love down, and donated to the earthquake of Wenchuan. Although he is in poverty, he still passes his love down, and he donated to the earthquake of Wenchuan. When linking two independent clauses (sentence with subject and verb) using a conjunction like "and", you'll need a subject. "He" serves this purpose. Side Note: "lives in poverty" would sound better, but "is in poverty" works too. |
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