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Feb. 6, 2021

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"Canada's big cities, such as Vancouver and Toronto, are not as prosperous with a lot of tall buildings as those in Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen in China." Speaking of shame, I, a person who has been living in Canada for four years and did not return to China in this period, went to Toronto, and when I entered the city, I was happy from the bottom of my heart because I saw the high-rise buildings and traffic in the city. The city where I live is too small to see any tall buildings. A friend from Beijing, who immigrated here when his child was 5 years old, stayed here for 3 years. Children once went to the city and saw the limited high-rise buildings in the city center. His kid sighed and said, "I have never seen such a tall building.". My friend are crying and laughing-children from Beijing have already forgotten the tall buildings in Beijing.

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"Canada's big cities, such as Vancouver and Toronto, are not as prosperous with a lot ofnor do they have as many tall buildings as those in Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen in China."

Speaking of shame, I, a person who hashamefully, I have been living in Canada for four years and didhave not return to China during this period, but when I went to Toronto, and when I entered the city, I was happy from the bottom of my heart because I saw the high-rise buildings and traffic in the city.

Required a little rewrite to sound more natural.

The city where I live is too small to sehave any tall buildings.

A friend from Beijing, who immigrated here when his child was 5 years old, stayed here for 3 years.

CHis children once went to the city and saw the limited high-rise buildings in the city center.

His kid sighed and said, "I have never seen such a tall building.".

My friend are crying and laughing-cried from laughing, because his children from Beijing haved already forgotten the tall buildings in Beijing.

Translation Practice


"Canada's big cities, such as Vancouver and Toronto, are not as prosperous with a lot of tall buildings as those in Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen in China."


"Canada's big cities, such as Vancouver and Toronto, are not as prosperous with a lot ofnor do they have as many tall buildings as those in Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen in China."

Speaking of shame, I, a person who has been living in Canada for four years and did not return to China in this period, went to Toronto, and when I entered the city, I was happy from the bottom of my heart because I saw the high-rise buildings and traffic in the city.


Speaking of shame, I, a person who hashamefully, I have been living in Canada for four years and didhave not return to China during this period, but when I went to Toronto, and when I entered the city, I was happy from the bottom of my heart because I saw the high-rise buildings and traffic in the city.

Required a little rewrite to sound more natural.

The city where I live is too small to see any tall buildings.


The city where I live is too small to sehave any tall buildings.

A friend from Beijing, who immigrated here when his child was 5 years old, stayed here for 3 years.


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Children once went to the city and saw the limited high-rise buildings in the city center.


CHis children once went to the city and saw the limited high-rise buildings in the city center.

His kid sighed and said, "I have never seen such a tall building.".


His kid sighed and said, "I have never seen such a tall building.".

My friend are crying and laughing-children from Beijing have already forgotten the tall buildings in Beijing.


My friend are crying and laughing-cried from laughing, because his children from Beijing haved already forgotten the tall buildings in Beijing.

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