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Jan. 7, 2021

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Translation Practice

It snowed today. I went to the park to play with snow during snowy days. I was also able to wear my shoes and the shoes were very suitable to play with snow because it was big and waterproof. Afterwards, I like drinking a cup of hot chocolate in the evening.

Corrections

It snowed today.

I went to the park to play win the snow during the snowy days.

You can also say "when it's snowy, I go to the park to play in the snow," if you do this more than once.

I was also able to wear my shoes, and the shoes were very suitable to play wigood for playing in the snow because it wasthey were big and waterproof.

Afterwards, I like drinkingenjoyed a cup of hot chocolate in the evening.

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Good work. In some cases, the sentence can change depending on whether the action is habitual or a discrete event.

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Jack

Jan. 7, 2021

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Thank you very much

Translation Practice


It snowed today.


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I went to the park to play with snow during snowy days.


I went to the park to play win the snow during the snowy days.

You can also say "when it's snowy, I go to the park to play in the snow," if you do this more than once.

I was also able to wear my shoes and the shoes were very suitable to play with snow because it was big and waterproof.


I was also able to wear my shoes, and the shoes were very suitable to play wigood for playing in the snow because it wasthey were big and waterproof.

Afterwards, I like drinking a cup of hot chocolate in the evening.


Afterwards, I like drinkingenjoyed a cup of hot chocolate in the evening.

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