Jan. 7, 2021
Translation Practice
You asked me if I still love you. I hesitated for a long time and was a little bit surprised. Finally, I said with a bitter smile “I loved" and then turned to leave. I will never forget you crying. It was not that I changed my mind; It was just that I was too stupid then. Later on, I just wanted to give myself a loud slap. But if you still think I was too cruel, you will be happier if you know that I have had a terrible ten years.
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You asked me if I, “Do you still love you.me?”
I was a bit surprised so I hesitated for a long time and was a little bit surprised.¶
Finally, I said with a bitter smile “I loved you" and then turned to leave.
It was not that I changed my mind; It was just that I was toso stupid then.
Later on, I justI wanted to give myself a loud slap.
But if you still thinkI was cruel. You may be happy to know I have had a terrible ten years. ¶
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I was too cruel, you will be happier if you know that I have had a terrible ten years.. You may be happy to know that my last ten years have been terrible.
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The last sentence definitely has a punch. It shows that what goes around comes around. I like to vary the length of sentences and simplify them whenever possible.
Jan. 7, 2021
Thank you very much
I hesitated for a long time and was a little bit surprised.
Finally, I said with a bitter smile, “I loved you, but I don't love you anymore" and then turned to leave.
I will never forget you crying/ how you cried.
It wa's not that I changed my mind; It wait's just that I was too stupid back then.
Later on, I just, I wanted to give myself a loud slapslap in the face for saying I didn't love you anymore.
But iIf you still think I was too cruel then, you will be happier if youto know that I have had a terrible ten years without you.
Jan. 7, 2021
Thank you very much
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You asked me if I still love you. ¶ |
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I hesitated for a long time and was a little bit surprised. I hesitated for a long time and was a I was a bit surprised so I hesitated for a long time |
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Finally, I said with a bitter smile “I loved" and then turned to leave. Finally, I said with a bitter smile, “I loved you, but I don't love you anymore" and then turned to leave. Finally |
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I will never forget you crying. I will never forget you crying/ how you cried. |
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It was not that I changed my mind; It was just that I was too stupid then. It I |
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Later on, I just wanted to give myself a loud slap. Later Later |
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But if you still think I was too cruel, you will be happier if you know that I have had a terrible ten years.
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