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Dec. 26, 2020

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Yesterday was Christmas. So what are my thoughts about Christmas? My recall of it is not so nice.
I remember that I quarreled with my sisters many times during my childhood: who’s gift was good? who damaged this year’s holiday and so on. So even now, I still think that Christmas without gifts is better. You better donate money to the poor instead of buying me gifts. This Christmas, no one bought me gifts and I didn’t buy gifts for anyone. To be honest, I can buy things for myself if I want. The things people buy me are usually not what I want. This is more like that they give me trash and I will throw it away secretly, further more I will pretend to say with a smile: oh the gifts are what I want. Why should I buy things that others don’t want? No matter how much money I have spent, I probably buy unsuitable gifts because I don’t know what they really want.


昨天是圣诞节。那我对圣诞节有什么感想呢?我的回忆没有那么美好。
小时候,我记得跟姐妹吵了很多架:谁的礼物比较好、谁破坏了这年的节日。因此到现在我还觉得没有礼物的圣诞节更好,你最好给穷人捐钱,而不是给我买礼物。今年没有人送我礼物,我也没有送给别人礼物。老实说,如果我想要什么我可以自己买。而且别人送我的礼物通常是我不想要的。就像他们给我垃圾我后来会秘密地扔掉似的,还笑着假装说“哦,这个礼物就是我想要的”。我为什么要浪费钱给别人买他们不想要的礼物呢?不管我花了多少钱,因为不了解别人的内心所想,很可能给别人买了不合适的礼物。

Corrections

Yesterday was Christmas.

So what are my thoughts about Christmas?

My recallmemories of it isare not so nice.

I remember that I quarreled with my sisters many times during my childhood: about whose gift was good?better.

Sounds better this way.

So even now, I still think that Christmas without gifts is better.

You better donate money to the poor instead of buying me gifts.

This Christmas, no one bought me gifts and I didn’t buy gifts for anyone.

To be honest, I can buy things for myself if I want.

The things people buy me are usually not what I want.

ThisIt is more likely that they will give me trash and I will throw it away secretly, further more. Later on I will pretend to(that I liked it and) say with a smile: "oh the gifts awere what I want.ed."

Why should I buy things that others don’t want?

No matter how much money I have spent, I probably buyend up buying unsuitable gifts because I don’t know what they really want.

Sounds better.

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Well done!

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Jack

Dec. 27, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Translation practice


Yesterday was Christmas.


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So what are my thoughts about Christmas?


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My recall of it is not so nice.


My recallmemories of it isare not so nice.

I remember that I quarreled with my sisters many times during my childhood: who’s gift was good?


I remember that I quarreled with my sisters many times during my childhood: about whose gift was good?better.

Sounds better this way.

who damaged this year’s holiday and so on.


So even now, I still think that Christmas without gifts is better.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You better donate money to the poor instead of buying me gifts.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This Christmas, no one bought me gifts and I didn’t buy gifts for anyone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To be honest, I can buy things for myself if I want.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The things people buy me are usually not what I want.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is more like that they give me trash and I will throw it away secretly, further more I will pretend to say with a smile: oh the gifts are what I want.


ThisIt is more likely that they will give me trash and I will throw it away secretly, further more. Later on I will pretend to(that I liked it and) say with a smile: "oh the gifts awere what I want.ed."

Why should I buy things that others don’t want?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

No matter how much money I have spent, I probably buy unsuitable gifts because I don’t know what they really want.


No matter how much money I have spent, I probably buyend up buying unsuitable gifts because I don’t know what they really want.

Sounds better.

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