Feb. 4, 2021
Translation Practice
On January 30, a man in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province encountered an accident when he took the elevator: he was strongly kissed by a strange girl
According to the video exposed on the Internet, the man just walked to the elevator. Suddenly, a girl wearing a brown coat and a white hat came by. The girl looked back at the man, suddenly took off the mask of the boy, and hugged the boy and kissed him strongly.
Perhaps too frightened, perhaps for the sake of self-vindication, the man raised his hands and did not dare to touch, letting the girl cuddle and kiss.
Careful netizens also observed that the girl seemed to hug so hard that the man's feet were "off the ground".
A girl who came with the girl wearing a white hat was also very surprised after seeing her friend's actions. After snickering for a while, she quickly pulled the girl into the elevator and pushed the man out of the elevator.
After this video was exposed, it quickly triggered a hot discussion among netizens.
Some netizens said that girls are getting bolder now. "It seems that handsome boys have to protect themselves when they go out.". Some netizens also said that although they advocate freedom of love now and they can bravely pursue those who are handsome and be liked, "but they should go step by step, and suddenly they are too violent, which may scare people away".
Translation Practice
On January 30, a man in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province, encountered an accidentxperienced a startling situation when he took the elevator: he was strongaggressively kissed by a female strange girlr.
"Strange" can mean odd or different which does make sense in this situation. If he didn't know who she was, however, we'd use the word "stranger."
According to thea video exporeleased on the Internet, the man just walked onto the elevator.
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According to a video published to the Internet, the man just walked onto the elevator.
Suddenlyoon after, a girl wearing a brown coat and a white hat came by.
or "Shortly after, a girl wearing a brown coat and a white hat came by."
"Suddenly" connotes that something is a surprise or unexpected.
The girl looked back at the manboy, suddenly took off thehis mask of the boy, and hugged the boy and kissed him strongaggressively.
Taking off someone's mask without permission is definitely a surprise these days so using "suddenly" in this sentence works very well.
These also work.
The girl looked back at the man, suddenly took off his mask, and hugged and kissed him aggressively.
The young woman looked back at the man, suddenly took off his mask, and hugged and kissed him aggressively.
Perhaps too frightened, perhaps for the sake of self-vindicaprotection, the man raised his hands and did not dare to touch her, letting the girl cuddle and kiss.
I'm not sure how "self-vindication" would help the man here. When we vindicate ourselves, it means we demonstrate that we did the correct thing.
CarefulObservant netizens also observnoted that the girl seemed to hug so hard that the man's feet were "off the ground"."
Another girl wearing a white hat who came with the gfirl wearing a white hatst one was also very surprised after seeing her friend's actions.
After this vincideont was exposed, it quickly triggered a hot discussion among netizens.
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After this video was published, it quickly triggered a hot discussion among netizens.
The video is "published" while the incident is "exposed."
Some netizens said that girls are getting bolder now.
"It seems that handsome boys have to protect themselves when they go out.".
Some netizens also said that, although they currently advocate for freedom tof love now and they canink people are allowed to bravely pursue those who are handsome and be liked, "in order to be liked, they also said, "... but they should go step by step, and suddenly they are too violent, which may scare people away"."
The quotation, "... but they should go step by step, and suddenly they are too violent, which may scare people away," should be something like this:
"... but they should go step by step instead of being suddenly aggressive, which may scare people away."
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Good job!
This incident sounds terrible. Took off his mask? Since when has covid been cured? Also, women don't like it when male strangers sexually assault them. Why should men feel any differently?
Feb. 4, 2021
Males feel the same way as females when they face this kind of incident. Thank you for your corrections. It takes you a lot of time.
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On January 30, a man in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province encountered an accident when he took the elevator: he was strongly kissed by a strange girl On January 30, a man in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province, e "Strange" can mean odd or different which does make sense in this situation. If he didn't know who she was, however, we'd use the word "stranger." |
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According to the video exposed on the Internet, the man just walked to the elevator. According to or According to a video published to the Internet, the man just walked onto the elevator. |
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Suddenly, a girl wearing a brown coat and a white hat came by. S or "Shortly after, a girl wearing a brown coat and a white hat came by." "Suddenly" connotes that something is a surprise or unexpected. |
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The girl looked back at the man, suddenly took off the mask of the boy, and hugged the boy and kissed him strongly. The girl looked back at the Taking off someone's mask without permission is definitely a surprise these days so using "suddenly" in this sentence works very well. These also work. The girl looked back at the man, suddenly took off his mask, and hugged and kissed him aggressively. The young woman looked back at the man, suddenly took off his mask, and hugged and kissed him aggressively. |
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Perhaps too frightened, perhaps for the sake of self-vindication, the man raised his hands and did not dare to touch, letting the girl cuddle and kiss. Perhaps too frightened, perhaps for the sake of self- I'm not sure how "self-vindication" would help the man here. When we vindicate ourselves, it means we demonstrate that we did the correct thing. |
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Careful netizens also observed that the girl seemed to hug so hard that the man's feet were "off the ground".
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A girl who came with the girl wearing a white hat was also very surprised after seeing her friend's actions. Another girl wearing a white hat who came with the |
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After snickering for a while, she quickly pulled the girl into the elevator and pushed the man out of the elevator. |
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After this video was exposed, it quickly triggered a hot discussion among netizens. After this or After this video was published, it quickly triggered a hot discussion among netizens. The video is "published" while the incident is "exposed." |
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Some netizens said that girls are getting bolder now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"It seems that handsome boys have to protect themselves when they go out.". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some netizens also said that although they advocate freedom of love now and they can bravely pursue those who are handsome and be liked, "but they should go step by step, and suddenly they are too violent, which may scare people away". Some netizens also said that, although they currently advocate for freedom to The quotation, "... but they should go step by step, and suddenly they are too violent, which may scare people away," should be something like this: "... but they should go step by step instead of being suddenly aggressive, which may scare people away." |
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