Jan. 2, 2021
Translation Practice
Fan Kexin is a Chinese skater. Her home is in Qitaihe, China, and many skaters are from there. When she was a child, her family was very poor. In 2003, she went to study skating at 9 years old. She joined the Chinese skating team at seventeen.
In 2012, she first participated in the World Skating Competition in England. She really wants to get first place because she can help her mom and dad to live a good life. She called her dad and mom as soon as she had just got the first place, and her whole family was very joyful.
Now, 26 years old Fan Kexin has participated eight times in the World Competition, and received first place five times. She hopes she can get first place in the Olympics Winter Game of 2022.
Fan Kexin is a Chinese speed skater.
Usually, when people talk about skaters in English, they specify what kind of skater they mean. Some examples: figure skater, speed skater, skateboarder
She called her dad and mom as soon as she had just got thewon first place, and her whole family was very joyful.
Now, 26 years old, Fan Kexin has participated eight times in the World Competition, and received first place five times.
She hopes she can get first place in the Winter Olympics Winter Game of 2022.
"the Olympics Winter Game of 2022" is understandable. But in English, "Winter Olympics" or "Winter Olympic Games" is more common.
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What an amazing athlete!
Jan. 2, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Translation Practice |
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Fan Kexin is a Chinese skater. Fan Kexin is a Chinese speed skater. Usually, when people talk about skaters in English, they specify what kind of skater they mean. Some examples: figure skater, speed skater, skateboarder |
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Her home is in Qitaihe, China, and many skaters are from there. |
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When she was a child, her family was very poor. |
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In 2003, she went to study skating at 9 years old. |
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She joined the Chinese skating team at seventeen. |
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In 2012, she first participated in the World Skating Competition in England. |
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She really wants to get first place because she can help her mom and dad to live a good life. |
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She called her dad and mom as soon as she had just got the first place, and her whole family was very joyful. She called her dad and mom as soon as she |
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Now, 26 years old Fan Kexin has participated eight times in the World Competition, and received first place five times. Now |
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She hopes she can get first place in the Olympics Winter Game of 2022. She hopes she can get first place in the Winter Olympics "the Olympics Winter Game of 2022" is understandable. But in English, "Winter Olympics" or "Winter Olympic Games" is more common. |
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