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Dec. 30, 2020

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I spent a long time staying home. Apart from going to a restaurant, I didn’t go out. But today is different. Recently, because of some things, I didn’t want to go out. For instance, yesterday evening, I at first planned to go to Dongzhimen to watch a movie, but when I just went out I found that the temperature was really low: it was around minus 9 degrees. When I walked, cold wind blew on my face, it seemed like my nose would freeze off. I was born in Australia, and the lowest temperature in Australia wouldn’t fall below zero. But people there have to stand the continuous rainy days and unstable weather. I think Australians cannot stand Beijing’s weather. Fortunately, today is much warmer than yesterday, so I went to school to study.

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I spent a long time stayingat home.

Recently, because of some things, I didn’for many reasons, I haven't wanted to go out.

For instance, yesterday evening, I at first planned to go to Dongzhimen to watch a movie, but when I justas soon as I went outside I found that the temperature was really low: it was it too cold (around minus 9 degrees.!)

WhenAs I walked, the cold wind blewowing on my face, made it it seemed like my nose would freeze off.

I was born in Australia, andwhere the lowest temperature in Australia wouldn’tnever falls below zero.

Hey! what about Mt Tazzie? :)

But people there have to withstand the continuous rainy days and unstable weather.

I think Australians cannot would not withstand Beijing’s weather.

Fortunately, today ishas been much warmer than yesterday, so I went to school to study.

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Jack

Dec. 30, 2020

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Thank you very much

Translation practice

I spent a long time staying home.

Apart from going to a restaurant, I didn’t go out.

But today is different.

For instance, yesterday evening, I planned at first planned to go to Dongzhimen to watch a movie, but when I just went out I found out that the temperature was really low: it was around minus 9 degrees.

When I walked, cold wind blew on my face, i. It seemed like my nose would freeze off.

I was born in Australia, and the lowest temperature in Australia wouldn’t fall below zero degrees.

But people there have to stand the continuous rainy days and unstable weather.

I think Australians cannot stand Beijing’s weather.

Fortunately, today is much warmer than yesterday, so I went to school to study.

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You're quite right about the Australian weather being unpredictable, but it doesn't ever get to freezing temperatures. Good job!

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Jack

Dec. 30, 2020

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Thank you very much.

But today is different.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I spent a long time staying home.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I spent a long time stayingat home.

Apart from going to a restaurant, I didn’t go out.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Recently, because of some things, I didn’t want to go out.


Recently, because of some things, I didn’for many reasons, I haven't wanted to go out.

For instance, yesterday evening, I at first planned to go to Dongzhimen to watch a movie, but when I just went out I found that the temperature was really low: it was around minus 9 degrees.


For instance, yesterday evening, I planned at first planned to go to Dongzhimen to watch a movie, but when I just went out I found out that the temperature was really low: it was around minus 9 degrees.

For instance, yesterday evening, I at first planned to go to Dongzhimen to watch a movie, but when I justas soon as I went outside I found that the temperature was really low: it was it too cold (around minus 9 degrees.!)

When I walked, cold wind blew on my face, it seemed like my nose would freeze off.


When I walked, cold wind blew on my face, i. It seemed like my nose would freeze off.

WhenAs I walked, the cold wind blewowing on my face, made it it seemed like my nose would freeze off.

I was born in Australia, and the lowest temperature in Australia wouldn’t fall below zero.


I was born in Australia, and the lowest temperature in Australia wouldn’t fall below zero degrees.

I was born in Australia, andwhere the lowest temperature in Australia wouldn’tnever falls below zero.

Hey! what about Mt Tazzie? :)

But people there have to stand the continuous rainy days and unstable weather.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But people there have to withstand the continuous rainy days and unstable weather.

I think Australians cannot stand Beijing’s weather.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think Australians cannot would not withstand Beijing’s weather.

Fortunately, today is much warmer than yesterday, so I went to school to study.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Fortunately, today ishas been much warmer than yesterday, so I went to school to study.

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