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Jack

Jan. 4, 2021

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I finally received cat food. I thought about what cat food I should buy when I was in the supermarket. Maybe it was still tuna like the last time I bought it. At the time, a wonderful scene showed up in front of me: a whole shelf of cat food. I bought one pack excitedly, and went straight home to feed the cats. The two cats immediately eat out the whole food. Afterwards, I heard someone knocking on the door; My express arrived-the cat food l bought from Jingdong. I sighed-there is either a lack of cat food or too much cat food. However, there is enough cat food; The cats have food to eat. Yesterday, my neighbor returned. When I slept, she quietly opened my door and let the cats come back to her room. I wasn’t aware of this situation then, so I was nervous when I got up this morning and didn’t find the cats. Did I forget to shut the door when the cats ran away? I finally learned that my neighbor had already returned and it was earlier than I expected.

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The two cats immediately eat out the whole all of the food.

Afterwards, I heard someone knocking on the door;. My express arrived-the cat food l bought from Jingdong.

However, there is enough cat food; Tthe cats have food to eat.

No capitalization after using ;

I finally learnedfound out that my neighbor had already returned and it was earlier than I expected.

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Jack

Jan. 5, 2021

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Thank you very much.

Yesterday, my neighbor returned.


When I slept, she quietly opened my door and let the cats come back to her room.


Translation Practice


I finally received cat food.


I thought about what cat food I should buy when I was in the supermarket.


Maybe it was still tuna like the last time I bought it.


At the time, a wonderful scene showed up in front of me: a whole shelf of cat food.


I bought one pack excitedly, and went straight home to feed the cats.


The two cats immediately eat out the whole food.


The two cats immediately eat out the whole all of the food.

Afterwards, I heard someone knocking on the door; My express arrived-the cat food l bought from Jingdong.


Afterwards, I heard someone knocking on the door;. My express arrived-the cat food l bought from Jingdong.

I sighed-there is either a lack of cat food or too much cat food.


However, there is enough cat food; The cats have food to eat.


However, there is enough cat food; Tthe cats have food to eat.

No capitalization after using ;

I wasn’t aware of this situation then, so I was nervous when I got up this morning and didn’t find the cats.


Did I forget to shut the door when the cats ran away?


I finally learned that my neighbor had already returned and it was earlier than I expected.


I finally learnedfound out that my neighbor had already returned and it was earlier than I expected.

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